Scribed Relief
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Visionary's Quest"Poetry about poetry
17 total reviews
Comment from jlsavell
Jewell, 'when secrets rest behind each moon.' Again another breathtaking composition. Inspirational as it truly nuges the reader to join, to come along, and find their song and it can be found in even the most mundane things, the happenstance of a day, or the splendor of nature. so well done.. jimi
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
  |
Jewell, 'when secrets rest behind each moon.' Again another breathtaking composition. Inspirational as it truly nuges the reader to join, to come along, and find their song and it can be found in even the most mundane things, the happenstance of a day, or the splendor of nature. so well done.. jimi
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
-
Amen. ...:-)
You thrill me with this browse along the windy roads of my journey in thoughts, called my portfolio!
What a sweetheart.
Comment from Jean Lutz
This is so YOU. Will you be joining FanMusic.com? It would be a great place to display your handiwork. In this one you describe my best time of the day -- dawn. That is when the world and I are at our best and we have a bit of time to commune.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
|
This is so YOU. Will you be joining FanMusic.com? It would be a great place to display your handiwork. In this one you describe my best time of the day -- dawn. That is when the world and I are at our best and we have a bit of time to commune.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
-
I don't have any original music to add as of yet. Still praying for a computer as I am doing this all from my smart phone.
Thank you for your confidence in this work and me. Love ya, Jean.
Comment from WrittenWonders03
As alwas, here is another poem of yours I like. You have a way of painting a picture in my mind that has profound meaning and beauty. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
|
As alwas, here is another poem of yours I like. You have a way of painting a picture in my mind that has profound meaning and beauty. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
-
Thanks darlin! You so kind.
I need a challenge. give me a one word topic or three random words to use in a poem. Can't wait!
-
Ok heres 3 random words- passion, stifle, succulent. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
-
I like!
you got it....wheels are turning to create something unique.
Comment from adewpearl
excellent use of personification
strong use of rhyming couplets
nice alliteration in phrases like silent screams
and sense a silent feather's fall
come dance with me - a wonderfully inviting tone
good alliteration in sultry songs
Brooke
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
|
excellent use of personification
strong use of rhyming couplets
nice alliteration in phrases like silent screams
and sense a silent feather's fall
come dance with me - a wonderfully inviting tone
good alliteration in sultry songs
Brooke
Comment Written 17-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2012
-
Thanks Brooke.
Comment from Veronica Grace
Wow, what a work of art you present to us! Not only in your talent as a painter but as a poet as well. Great poem and an enjoyable read!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
|
Wow, what a work of art you present to us! Not only in your talent as a painter but as a poet as well. Great poem and an enjoyable read!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
-
You always too kind. Thank you.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, jewell, you did a great job writing this beautiful poem of finding the gems that are written on this website and understand what is being told behind the words.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
|
this is very well written, jewell, you did a great job writing this beautiful poem of finding the gems that are written on this website and understand what is being told behind the words.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
-
Not specifically about "this website" but, yeh, ok. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from HalfHoff
My favorite lines of all are the first two of verse six ...... I must have re-read them 4-5 times. You are really growing and blossoming darlin ... I love it. Lea
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
|
My favorite lines of all are the first two of verse six ...... I must have re-read them 4-5 times. You are really growing and blossoming darlin ... I love it. Lea
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2012
-
Thanks so much. I think all the growing and blossoming is from too much time alone to think! ;-) thanks for your encouraging words!
Comment from Judian James
AH, you at your best, Jewell. I LOVED the first verse ... who could resist not reading on? It's a musical, lyrical, magical piece of writing both comforting and welcoming.Bravo
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
|
AH, you at your best, Jewell. I LOVED the first verse ... who could resist not reading on? It's a musical, lyrical, magical piece of writing both comforting and welcoming.Bravo
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
-
Thanks so much, Jude!
-
my pleasure!!
Comment from rightforyou
Sweet
Another wonderful poem full of emotion and soothing words that carry a warm message of the Dark side of the moon...LOL.
Wonderful job I enjoyed reading this splendid poem...Ron
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
|
Sweet
Another wonderful poem full of emotion and soothing words that carry a warm message of the Dark side of the moon...LOL.
Wonderful job I enjoyed reading this splendid poem...Ron
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
-
Bless you, Ron. Thanks.
Comment from simonbagh
Hi dear,
I see that you are from the kind of souls that wants to be a sort of silence that restlessly echoes as touches to anything, I love the sense in you that is going to guide somehow, well read and a nice job, Simon.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
|
Hi dear,
I see that you are from the kind of souls that wants to be a sort of silence that restlessly echoes as touches to anything, I love the sense in you that is going to guide somehow, well read and a nice job, Simon.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2012
-
Thank you Simon.
To "be still and know" is such a gift.
I'm glad you understand.
