Paranormal Adventures
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "The Devil You Know"Case Studies of Hauntings
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Comment from Cindy Warren
The plot thickens. I'd suspected that contractor before, but it would seem the ghosts and demons didn't want his interference. Do they want that dirty sheriff around? Can't wait to find out.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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The plot thickens. I'd suspected that contractor before, but it would seem the ghosts and demons didn't want his interference. Do they want that dirty sheriff around? Can't wait to find out.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Hi, Cindy. I had fun writing this one, so glad you like dit, too. You rock! :) Bev
Comment from closetpoetjester
Goodness, now Jim is nowhere to be found...I knew that Porter guy was trouble...more great story telling and speaking of that...Yes, the team will need to get their stories straight now they have been noted as persons of interest and the less said the better. Lets hope they don't crack. They seem to be a pretty tight unit. I think there is a lot more to Sherriff Porter than you are letting on for some reason. Nice description of the ambiance and the food at the Inn too...Good job.
Cheers Closet xo
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Goodness, now Jim is nowhere to be found...I knew that Porter guy was trouble...more great story telling and speaking of that...Yes, the team will need to get their stories straight now they have been noted as persons of interest and the less said the better. Lets hope they don't crack. They seem to be a pretty tight unit. I think there is a lot more to Sherriff Porter than you are letting on for some reason. Nice description of the ambiance and the food at the Inn too...Good job.
Cheers Closet xo
Comment Written 02-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much for taking time to review my chapter, p. I'm putting this series into haitus for the time being as I have another book out right now. Your valuable opinions are always a special gift, no matter the writing. And I know that you take your time and put lots of energy into what you review. So, my friend, I thank you sincerely for your interest and care. Love ya, bevarooni.
Comment from psalmist
First of all, the Tipsy Butler reminds me of an inn my husband and I have stayed at a couple of times in southern Ohio. The food and setting are fabulous.
I'm glad to see another post in this story. It seems to team has a lot on their plates, and evil spirits are not their only enemies. Great job leaving the chapter with questions and an air of danger. Makes me look forward to the next installment. Linda
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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First of all, the Tipsy Butler reminds me of an inn my husband and I have stayed at a couple of times in southern Ohio. The food and setting are fabulous.
I'm glad to see another post in this story. It seems to team has a lot on their plates, and evil spirits are not their only enemies. Great job leaving the chapter with questions and an air of danger. Makes me look forward to the next installment. Linda
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thanks so much, Linda. I would love to stay at the real Tipsy Butler sometime. I actually heard from the Innkeeper when I first started the story - somehow she had found out through the Internet that I was using their Inn for a setting. I have no idea how that happened - but she was very gracious. As are you, to take time to review my story and give such a great review. I appreciate it, Linda! Blessings, Bev
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Good addition to your previous posts.
Jim's abandoned vehicle was parked in front of the cottage with the keys in the ignition." Luke replied. (comma after ignition)
Mike was the first to speak. (comma after speak)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Good addition to your previous posts.
Jim's abandoned vehicle was parked in front of the cottage with the keys in the ignition." Luke replied. (comma after ignition)
Mike was the first to speak. (comma after speak)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thanks much, barbara.
Comment from Gungalo
Well they have experience something new and been advised to contact their lawyers. What does that mean? Do they have trouble coming? I sincerely hope not.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Well they have experience something new and been advised to contact their lawyers. What does that mean? Do they have trouble coming? I sincerely hope not.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Complications loom! Thanks, Gungalo.
Comment from kleck140
YOur dialogue kept my interest and the way you can pull
me into the story is surreal. I want to learn how to do
that by reading more of your chapters. Enjoyed the chapter and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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YOur dialogue kept my interest and the way you can pull
me into the story is surreal. I want to learn how to do
that by reading more of your chapters. Enjoyed the chapter and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much, my lovely friend. I sure appreciate your generosity and kind words of support! Hugs, Bev
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Sorry for the delay..Thanks for your quick reply
Comment from Tina55
I like the title - it made me want to know more, right off the bat!
This is well written, Bev. Your storytelling voice is clear and intelligent; and, you keep a quick pace. Your characters feel real. In fact, I felt like I could sit back and simply enjoy the story as they move and interact so easily within the world you've created for them. No SPAG that I could see - woohoo!
Oooh, I like the mysterious C on Emma's arm.
Cool trick with the visuals on the book.
The Tipsy Butler - Brilliant!
Hhmmm...Lisa certainly puts a crooked slant on the good sheriff. :)
Great ideas and very well expressed, Bev!
Love,
Tina
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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I like the title - it made me want to know more, right off the bat!
This is well written, Bev. Your storytelling voice is clear and intelligent; and, you keep a quick pace. Your characters feel real. In fact, I felt like I could sit back and simply enjoy the story as they move and interact so easily within the world you've created for them. No SPAG that I could see - woohoo!
Oooh, I like the mysterious C on Emma's arm.
Cool trick with the visuals on the book.
The Tipsy Butler - Brilliant!
Hhmmm...Lisa certainly puts a crooked slant on the good sheriff. :)
Great ideas and very well expressed, Bev!
Love,
Tina
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Thanks so very much, Tina. I really appreciate your awesome review and words of support! You rock...Bev
Comment from Eleanor Buron
Chapter is convincing of reality - written boldly with great attention to characterization and detail. Luke, Mia, mike and the others are credible personalities; their dialog carries the story along. The tension tightens with the anticipated arrival of Sheriff Porter. Excellent chapter.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Chapter is convincing of reality - written boldly with great attention to characterization and detail. Luke, Mia, mike and the others are credible personalities; their dialog carries the story along. The tension tightens with the anticipated arrival of Sheriff Porter. Excellent chapter.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Eleanor. I really appreciate your generosity and your insights. So nice to know it hit some good notes for you. Blessings, Bev
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Yes, it did. You're welcome. Elly
Comment from peggles
Brilliant story telling and a good following chapter
You have realistic dialogue and vivid descriptive action
I liked the characters that you have created
they are so real and very believable
I enjoyed reading this very much
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Brilliant story telling and a good following chapter
You have realistic dialogue and vivid descriptive action
I liked the characters that you have created
they are so real and very believable
I enjoyed reading this very much
Comment Written 02-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, peggles. I really appreciate your generous review and interest in my chapter. Always good to hear from you! Kind regards, Bev
Comment from c_lucas
Lisa has had unpleasant experiences with the Sheriff. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Lisa has had unpleasant experiences with the Sheriff. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Thanks, charlie!
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You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
