Rainbow swings
Nonet26 total reviews
Comment from manjuneelam
A very pleasing composition with such wonderful words and verses. The poem has a smooth flow to it and pleasure to read and review.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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A very pleasing composition with such wonderful words and verses. The poem has a smooth flow to it and pleasure to read and review.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie
Comment from DionysusDeVille
This was really pretty and showed alot of hope, i believe thats what rainbows represent, hope and when we hang from them we hang onto those beliefs
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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This was really pretty and showed alot of hope, i believe thats what rainbows represent, hope and when we hang from them we hang onto those beliefs
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie
Comment from Tiny Owl
Great imagery presented in this nonet with excellent use of syllable count. As I can imagine children swinging from rainbows while butterflies drift through clouds. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Great imagery presented in this nonet with excellent use of syllable count. As I can imagine children swinging from rainbows while butterflies drift through clouds. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie
Comment from Galactia
what a beautiful display and poem is superb. you did a wonderful job with this. you should have entered this into the competition yesterday. A winner for shore.
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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what a beautiful display and poem is superb. you did a wonderful job with this. you should have entered this into the competition yesterday. A winner for shore.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 04-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie
Comment from deb552
I love this upbeat nonet. It has such a great flow, and your images are bright and cheery! Your thoughts are clever and unique "toes not touching the ground; petals in the breeze...." everything about this is a joy to read. If I had a 6 for you, I'd certainly award it! Form is perfect! xxxx deb
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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I love this upbeat nonet. It has such a great flow, and your images are bright and cheery! Your thoughts are clever and unique "toes not touching the ground; petals in the breeze...." everything about this is a joy to read. If I had a 6 for you, I'd certainly award it! Form is perfect! xxxx deb
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Thanks, Deb. Just having fun with this one!!! Debbie
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
I LOVE THIS poem and nonnets in general are one of my favorite forms. such a perfect song of freeedom. thank you so much for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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I LOVE THIS poem and nonnets in general are one of my favorite forms. such a perfect song of freeedom. thank you so much for sharing
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review!!! Debbie
Comment from manicblue
This is nice, Debbie. I've noticed that a lot of poems use the word "soar". It's so freeing somehow and I love reading poems that use it. This was a delightful poem of imagination to swing from rainbows, full of life, enjoying being a part of nature and the beauty around us. :)
Lucretia xx
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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This is nice, Debbie. I've noticed that a lot of poems use the word "soar". It's so freeing somehow and I love reading poems that use it. This was a delightful poem of imagination to swing from rainbows, full of life, enjoying being a part of nature and the beauty around us. :)
Lucretia xx
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Just having some fun and wishing I could be so free!!! Thanks. Take care~Debbie
Comment from nancyjam
I like this Nonet - the images are lovely
and it flows nicely down to the last syllable.
Nice use of alliteration with "toes/touching"
Imaginative and joyful.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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I like this Nonet - the images are lovely
and it flows nicely down to the last syllable.
Nice use of alliteration with "toes/touching"
Imaginative and joyful.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind and thoughtful review!!! Debbie
Comment from JW
Nice dream. It provides a good getaway on a rather hectic day. If one could only escape, an swing upon rainbows - leaving all the cares of the world, far below. JW
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Nice dream. It provides a good getaway on a rather hectic day. If one could only escape, an swing upon rainbows - leaving all the cares of the world, far below. JW
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Thank you-wouldn't it be wonderful??? Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
Oh this one really is for fun girl. Swinging from rainbows ... oh who wouldn't like to do this. Beautiful imagery with this one.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Oh this one really is for fun girl. Swinging from rainbows ... oh who wouldn't like to do this. Beautiful imagery with this one.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2012
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Oh, it would be so fun!!! Debbie
