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Tsunami 5-7-5

it wont leave my head, that so many are dead.

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Comment from rightforyou
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Sweet

I love these 5-7-5 poems and the message that they send...Yours Creates an image of lost hope through loss of something or someone close...Ron

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
    Thanks Ron :) i was studying them in school so i just thought..why not :D
Comment from Dutchie
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Very well written this 5-7-5 poem. Right syllable count.
I saw it on TV in an interview. People felt guilty because they were still alive.It has a huge impact on the survivors.
Well done. Fia

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
    I know it really changes peoples lives forever! its so sad..thankyou!
Comment from ernesto escarro
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Tsunami

No one escapes from danger
demonstrated by the Heavenly.
Humanity is short of Glory.
We need God's righteousness to live.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2012