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Senryu Provocations

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Reflection on human behavior

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Comment from Janie King
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I don't have television so I haven't heard his State of the Union address yet...in fact this is the first mention of it that I have seen. God bless.

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
    I didn't hear it either. My husband follows the politics. Too negative for me. Anyway, he said it was a repetition of last year's speech.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is veery well written, spitfire, you did a great job writing this senryu poem about the length of the speech that president obama gave. i enjoyed reading this one.

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2012
    Thanks, sweetwood. Hoped to make some people think about this.