Steps You Leave Behind
Questioning those who believe.28 total reviews
Comment from Anisa-
Hah, you were obviously born on the wrong planet! You need to seek out this dark world and show them how it's done. Lol. Once again, great job. I really enjoy your style of writing.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Hah, you were obviously born on the wrong planet! You need to seek out this dark world and show them how it's done. Lol. Once again, great job. I really enjoy your style of writing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from Linda England Bonam
This was very well written. You chose just the right wording to make it a very powerful piece. Enjoyable to read. Loved the whole presentation.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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This was very well written. You chose just the right wording to make it a very powerful piece. Enjoyable to read. Loved the whole presentation.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from appuhere
What a thought? wow... amazing.... the language you used was really nice to read.... i wonder how deep your imagination prevails and the magic revealed by your hands is really majestic... just loved reading it.... :)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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What a thought? wow... amazing.... the language you used was really nice to read.... i wonder how deep your imagination prevails and the magic revealed by your hands is really majestic... just loved reading it.... :)
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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WOW! Thank you for the fab review...dark lord
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Steps You Leave Behind' is a dark and intriguing piece. I swear I could smell sulfur while I was reading it. This was an interesting work to both read and review.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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'Steps You Leave Behind' is a dark and intriguing piece. I swear I could smell sulfur while I was reading it. This was an interesting work to both read and review.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
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dark lord, you're more than welcome.
Kindest wishes, the Duchess
Comment from adewpearl
Powerfully illustrated and presented poem
good alliteration in starves to be set
You create a dark mood well with word choices like the crimson mist of power
threats of betrayal
reign of terror Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Powerfully illustrated and presented poem
good alliteration in starves to be set
You create a dark mood well with word choices like the crimson mist of power
threats of betrayal
reign of terror Brooke :-)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much for the continued support of my writing...dark lord
Comment from HPicasso
Very poignat and thought provoking piece.Great imagery of Armageddon coming though. A dark piece of work, very well written and powerful provoking words. You did a great job writing this dark tale about the one doesn't follow a heavenly path.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Very poignat and thought provoking piece.Great imagery of Armageddon coming though. A dark piece of work, very well written and powerful provoking words. You did a great job writing this dark tale about the one doesn't follow a heavenly path.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...dark lord
Comment from Irish Rose
An intriguing write that makes me think of the devil himself speaking to all those around. This piece has a great message but doesn't flow so smoothly in some places which I think adds to the piece as a whole. Very thought provoking piece.
Rose
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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An intriguing write that makes me think of the devil himself speaking to all those around. This piece has a great message but doesn't flow so smoothly in some places which I think adds to the piece as a whole. Very thought provoking piece.
Rose
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the honest and thoughtful review...dark lord
Comment from Galactia
that is very powerful and disturbing poem. you written it and projected fear real well in this poem. And you did a damn good job And i would hate to say that maybe your right. be4 terrible if it was.
regards tia
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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that is very powerful and disturbing poem. you written it and projected fear real well in this poem. And you did a damn good job And i would hate to say that maybe your right. be4 terrible if it was.
regards tia
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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WOW!!!!! Thank you so very much for this outstanding review, I do appreciate the stars....dark lord
Comment from ju2t_m3
so creepy. makes one wonder where the evil will come from. thinking about who is really chuckling. i felt this was a well put together piece..with intense flow. grips the reader from the start
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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so creepy. makes one wonder where the evil will come from. thinking about who is really chuckling. i felt this was a well put together piece..with intense flow. grips the reader from the start
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much for the kind review...dark lord
Comment from Herb
Hmm, alot to digest. I'm not really a big fan of these cryptic ones just a little to round-about for my tastes. I'm sure its good if one the time to riddle it out.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Hmm, alot to digest. I'm not really a big fan of these cryptic ones just a little to round-about for my tastes. I'm sure its good if one the time to riddle it out.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you for stopping by and reviewing this piece...dark lord
