A Peaceful Place
Description of an Outdoor Scene21 total reviews
Comment from Bellringer
Debbie, Very poetic descriptions of this natural settings. You clearly conveyed the inspiration that such a place can have. Nature can teach us to seek harmony and keep flowing toward our dreams. Very nice. Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Debbie, Very poetic descriptions of this natural settings. You clearly conveyed the inspiration that such a place can have. Nature can teach us to seek harmony and keep flowing toward our dreams. Very nice. Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 21-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Thank you. Writing this was a walk down memory lane since I can't really get to the wilderness anymore~Debbie
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You're welcome, Debbie. Poetry often comes from memories or flights of fancy inspired by many things. Blessings, Hector
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I felt the peace and serenty of the short essay you wrote. I needed the peace you described myself this morning. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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I felt the peace and serenty of the short essay you wrote. I needed the peace you described myself this morning. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Thank you. Writing this was a walk down memory lane since I can't really get to the wilderness anymore~Debbie
Comment from manicblue
wow, Debbie. I really needed to read this tonight. This was SO soothing and comforting. It gave me a sense of calm I haven't felt lately. Thank you so much for sharing this peaceful scene and the emotions it evoked in you. Beautifully descriptive and well written.
I hope you're doing well, tests results over, and treatment followed by healing is the next phase.
Just this:
It carries me to a place I feel I am one with nature,
(It carries me to a place where...)
Lucretia xx
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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wow, Debbie. I really needed to read this tonight. This was SO soothing and comforting. It gave me a sense of calm I haven't felt lately. Thank you so much for sharing this peaceful scene and the emotions it evoked in you. Beautifully descriptive and well written.
I hope you're doing well, tests results over, and treatment followed by healing is the next phase.
Just this:
It carries me to a place I feel I am one with nature,
(It carries me to a place where...)
Lucretia xx
Comment Written 21-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Thank you. Writing this was a walk down memory lane since I can't really get to the wilderness anymore~Debbie
Comment from me_tudor
This is beautiful and so true. I hope you actually got to go be by a stream. I too find that when I need to get centered and find real inner peace that sitting by a stream and listening to the water helps me find that inner peace.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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This is beautiful and so true. I hope you actually got to go be by a stream. I too find that when I need to get centered and find real inner peace that sitting by a stream and listening to the water helps me find that inner peace.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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I used to do this. I haven't found a spot that is wheelchair accessible. I truly do miss it!!! Debbie
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Where do you live.
Comment from deb552
I felt like I could have been the person in the scene you described. You've created wonderful images with your descriptive words. I love the details you've included with "listening to the call of birds and hearing the rustle of leaves as a doe with her fawn pass by." When someone says 'I am one with nature,' you've captured what that means. Love your choice of artwork as it enhances your thoughts. xxxx deb
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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I felt like I could have been the person in the scene you described. You've created wonderful images with your descriptive words. I love the details you've included with "listening to the call of birds and hearing the rustle of leaves as a doe with her fawn pass by." When someone says 'I am one with nature,' you've captured what that means. Love your choice of artwork as it enhances your thoughts. xxxx deb
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2012
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Thanks so much Deb!!! Debbie
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my pleasure!
Comment from mermaids
Vivid descriptions and feeligns of being outside in the natural world and the peace it brings us. This essay brings the reader to another place.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Vivid descriptions and feeligns of being outside in the natural world and the peace it brings us. This essay brings the reader to another place.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much!!! Debbie
Comment from Bri97
Wow this is really good! I love your style of writing; the language and description you have used is really beautiful. Well done, like I said this is amazing, I can't fault it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Wow this is really good! I love your style of writing; the language and description you have used is really beautiful. Well done, like I said this is amazing, I can't fault it.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you. Your review made my day!!! Debbie
Comment from JW
In reading your very well written short story, I was easily carried away to my teen years, in the country - as partly described in my novel, The Question.
What great and relaxing times they were - to be able to stand by a stream and enjoy nature's beauty. JW
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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In reading your very well written short story, I was easily carried away to my teen years, in the country - as partly described in my novel, The Question.
What great and relaxing times they were - to be able to stand by a stream and enjoy nature's beauty. JW
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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I miss being able to get out with nature. Thank you for your kind review!!! Debbie
Comment from stanishmichelle
I do like listening to the relaxing sounds of a flowing stream or gentle waves at the beach. You gave good imagery through your words to make one capture the moment too. All the best for the new year. Michelle
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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I do like listening to the relaxing sounds of a flowing stream or gentle waves at the beach. You gave good imagery through your words to make one capture the moment too. All the best for the new year. Michelle
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Thank you! Best wishes for your new Year too!!! debbie
Comment from barkingdog
I think this would qualify as prose-poetry. Don't you, Debbie?
It is very lyrically descriptive by its phrasing['feel the breeze as the trees ever so gently move.' (as the trees move ever so gently is less poetic). You have done this through out the piece giving it a beautiful flow.] and I love the feel/emotion it evoked -- a quiet restful, meditative moment.
-water's flow
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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I think this would qualify as prose-poetry. Don't you, Debbie?
It is very lyrically descriptive by its phrasing['feel the breeze as the trees ever so gently move.' (as the trees move ever so gently is less poetic). You have done this through out the piece giving it a beautiful flow.] and I love the feel/emotion it evoked -- a quiet restful, meditative moment.
-water's flow
Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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I think it would be prose poetry too. I didn't think of that when I posted it. Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review!!! Debbie
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You're welcome.:)ellen
