Comment from rashi kumar

Excellent

I read the previous chapter an hour back, I think.
Very well-written again!
Sweet Tommie and Reggy!
Very interesting and grasping read,
a good flow and nice rhyming!!
Pleasure...

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

---

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012

Thank you Rashi, I am so glad you like this one too, and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poems!! Thank you so much, once again! xsx

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

aww love it i am indeed a child in adult form lol and im pleased cause it helped me appreciate your work all the more thanks gazzax

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

---

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012

Thank you Gazzax, I am a child in an adult body too, it's much more fun, isn't it! I am glad you liked it, thanks again.xsx

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

This poem was good fun. You had me worried at first and then such relief in the end. I'm glad the elves were nice! I got a giggle out of the name Popsicorn Bog. It struck me funny. I enjoyed the rhythm of your rhyming if that makes any sense! I like poems that rhyme. I can definitely picture the characters in my head. Illustrations would be wonderful!

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

---

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012

Thank you so much! that is such a great review! Popsicorn Bog, just popped into my head, excuse the pun!! I thought it had a nice ring about it! Thank you again! xsx

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

what fun this book is going to be... you should have no trouble publishing... i'm hoping you are headed in that direction. love the stories... looking forward to more adventure. yours, diana

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

---

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012

Thank you Artasylum, (love that name!!) Their are more coming,it is so nice to hear your views on them, it gives me a little more confidence to carry on. xsx

Comment from soulwriterslife

Exceptional

i love the chracters the humor not over thrown your sentence structure and word use keep a steady flow allowing easy reading wondeful

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

---

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012

Thank you so much again!! I really feel so honored by your star rating and for such a lovely review. xsx Sandra

Comment from ScarletClearwater

Excellent

This is wonderfully written for how long the verses are. It must be difficult? You did wonders with your imagery and rhyme. Kudos on this piece. Best of luck to you!

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012

---

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012

Thank you Scarlet, I do get carried away with my verses, I'm afraid!! Thank you for your lovely review, I do appreciate it.