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The Clock On The Wall

As a friends heart goes, so does mine

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Comment from MumEsGirl
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Beautifully written it brings a tear to my eye. It is never easy to say goodbye to loved ones. Especially when they are taken in such an unjust fashion.

And yes the sun will shine again

kate

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
    Hi there!! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this one! I hope you are staying safe and warm!! hugs, Susan
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a very touching piece. I too read Lee's account of trying to deal with his Mother's death. This is a fine tribute. My mom and dad have gone too and it is heartbreaking but I'm glad I had them as long as I did. We all deal with grief a little differently but yet the stages seem to be there for all of us.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
    Hi there!! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this one! I hope you are staying safe and warm!! hugs, Susan
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, susan, you did a great job writing this essay about losing your mother and the anger you felt at her death, getting her things together. i know lee will appreciate it.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
    Hi there!! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this one! I hope you are staying safe and warm!! hugs, Susan
Comment from Trybuck
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We would like to hold on to our loved ones as long as we can, but we know the day will come when we have to say good-bye.
Very well done, Buck

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    HI Buck...thank you my friend. I am going thru old pictures, and the recent loss of a friends mother brought me to tears, rekindling my own pain. It's so hard...I am very grateful to have you as a friend too...Thank you again Buck. Susan
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
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What a lovely little story shows your spiritual beliefs a very good write with feeling and well written . Hi SUSAN THIS WAS GOOD . KEEP WRITING. Love Mary

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
    Hi there!! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing this one! I hope you are staying safe and warm!! hugs, Susan
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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Everyone who has lost a parent (especially suddenly) will relate to this, Suse. I lost one suddenly and one slowly. Made no difference. Loss is loss. We each come to terms with it eventually. For me, it's been 20 years. Hugs. :| Nancy

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Hi Nancy. Thank you so much...did you read Lee's post? His mother just passed and he wrote about his feelings. So heartbreaking, it got me to remembering my own mom and dad's passing. Now, with my own health issues, I am trying to talk openly with my son, who's 23, about my turn someday. I have had some pain these past few weeks that literally brought me to my knees, and my son was so upset. We just never know. Life can be so painful. I'm so grateful for you Nancy...and all the nice people here...xx. Susan
reply by N.K. Wagner on 11-Jan-2012
    Yes, I read it. He's mad at himself because he's already exhausted his "mad" at his brother and sister, and he can't be mad at his mom. Once everyone goes home he'll begin to relax. The sooner he cries, the sooner he'll heal. Then he'll have to decide his own future. Starting over financially at nearly 61 is a bitch, especially after being out of the loop for 6 years. But he's resourceful. He'll be okay. And I hope you will, too. Hugs. :} Nancy
Comment from robina1978
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Who is Lee, Susan? Loved your write. So sorry you lost both your parents and still miss them. It goes that way with a family bond. But you end more hopeful: probably meeting them again somewhere.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Oh, Ine...his FS name is Humpwhistle...a very nice and talented writer! I should add that in the notes...you should read his last post...it's heartwrenching...thank you for reading mine too Ine. Hugs, and love. Susan
reply by robina1978 on 11-Jan-2012
    Will check him out.
Comment from dbmccarter
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This is very introspective and heartfelt. You have described the loss of a loved one exactly right. We never get over missing them but we can see the sun again. Thanks for sharing this.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Thank you so much. It never goes away does it? But nature has a way of easing our pain over time. At least it has for me. I enjoy remembering the good times, and the best of what my folk's were. I'm pleased you took a minute to read for me...Susan
Comment from sweetthanesue
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this is a very touching story conveyed with empathy of the thoughts emotions and grief of such a sad loss.
The closing paragraph is the reality that we must continue in life till we are re-united with loved ones again.....sue

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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Thank you Sue...I looked at old photos again last night, and had to write this. Life is hard at times...and those who go before us, wouldn't want us to be so sad that we can't go on. I thank you so much for this nice review...Susan
Comment from Espresso momma
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WOW, this is heartfelt to the core. I understand each word to so true. This is a pain only God and ourselves can get us through. It is hard. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 11-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
    Hi there...thank you so much. I had to go back and search out old photos, and this is the result of that, because of a friends recent loss. It's funny how humans can link together in good and bad, happy, and sad. Thank you Roberta. hug, Susan