Comment from Betty517

Excellent

She is a wonderful artist, Angelheart. I really enjoyed this wonderful haiku. You are a great contender for this contest. Good luck.

Betty

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012

Thanks Betty for your encouraging review and indeed angelheart is a Legend..great artist...much appreciated your review..

Comment from Razz

Excellent

Breathe of life
Essence of living
Sustains all.

Very beautiful.
So wonderfully full of love.

Should be Breath...of life

Good luck in contest.
Razz

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012

thanks Razz I really appreciate your most encouraging review....

reply by Razz on 10-Jan-2012

You're welcome, my friend.
Razz

Comment from RADIO

Excellent

Excelent and one of the best
haiku I've seen and I definately
appreciate the words. What a
wonderful book mark this would make.
Radio

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012

thanks Radio I do so much appreciate your encouraging review and comments

Comment from peggles

Excellent

This was so perfect
also so true
Tiny words eminence content
I thought this to be absolutely right
simple and clear

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012

thanks so much peggles for your encouraging and positive review..much appreciated..

Comment from Modee

Excellent

There are going to be a lot of good entries into this contest. This is a very nice one. The picture, words and color combination all add to the display. very nice. :)

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012

thanks for the good review and comments...much appreciated,,sue

Comment from Penny 4 your thought

Excellent

Well done... You have obviously put some thought into this poem. The meter is perfect the message clear. Great job clearly a five

A Penny for your thought

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012

thank YOU for your kind review and comments..much appreciated.

Comment from rashi kumar

Excellent

This is really a great poem!
A little confusion if it should be 'breathe' or 'breath'.
Anyways it is very well-written and beautifully presented.
It is difficult to say so much in short!
BRAVO!
All the best!

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012

thanks for an encouraging review...yes there was a little confusion on breathe or Breath thanks for pointing that out,,settled for Breath...thanks again your review appreciated..

Comment from Cheryl Daphine

Excellent

A wonderful 3-5-3 haiku on air, for the contest. I love your choice of subject[literally]. Truly you have hit on the essence of air ,breath and life. Well done and best wishes.

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012

thanks for taking time to review and too your positive comments all very much appreciated..