George
a prince of a horse111 total reviews
Comment from litroc1700
very nice and also congratulation for the regonition you a very skilled author i also liked how you compared the horse to a falen sodier
love meera
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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very nice and also congratulation for the regonition you a very skilled author i also liked how you compared the horse to a falen sodier
love meera
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for this awesome review, litroc. I really appreciate and am honored by your words of support for George's story. Blessings, Bev
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your welcome i really enjoyed your work and hope that one day that i will have such skill
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You're so sweet! I'll bet you already do, my friend.
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thank you.. :)
Comment from Janie King
Oh dear..these kind of stories tip me over the edge and flowing river of tears and the dam is broken. I never had a horse, they're too big for me but I've had two puppies that got so sick I had to have them put to sleep and if was one of the most traumatizing things I've ever done. Good but sad piece. God bless.
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Oh dear..these kind of stories tip me over the edge and flowing river of tears and the dam is broken. I never had a horse, they're too big for me but I've had two puppies that got so sick I had to have them put to sleep and if was one of the most traumatizing things I've ever done. Good but sad piece. God bless.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Hi, Janie. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I appreciate you taking time to read and review George's story. Blessings, Bev
Comment from rusla
This is a sad but wonderful story about a wonderful and noble animal. My heart went out to George who was in pain. I also cried for him and being a former horse owner, I know the love between horse and person. This is story that makes you feel everything, well done.
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This is a sad but wonderful story about a wonderful and noble animal. My heart went out to George who was in pain. I also cried for him and being a former horse owner, I know the love between horse and person. This is story that makes you feel everything, well done.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Hello, rusla. Thank you for your splendid review and for sharing your personal insights. I really appreciate your generosity! Blessings, Bev
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Hi Bev, it was a wonderful story and tugged at my heart and that is what a story needs to do
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You're so sweet to say that! Xxx
Comment from missy98writer
Bev,
Your essay is beautifully written with amazing imagery. The art work you used is funky cool. In you essay you've used a very good narrative voice, great word structure and you effectively used the writing devices of alliteration and metaphor. You managed to establish an entertaining non-fiction piece of writing. I like your phrases: "She'd arranged a glorious garden party to celebrate George's life before euthanizing, The sky was robin egg blue, spoke of how George had been the only unconditionally loving male she'd ever known and made his way directly to the grave of his buddy." Your essay is moving and I'm bawling like a fool. What a poignant true story. . I'd recommend your non-fiction story to other reviewers. I'd urge you to keep on writing with a creative pen. Please have a blessed day, my friend...Melissa.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Bev,
Your essay is beautifully written with amazing imagery. The art work you used is funky cool. In you essay you've used a very good narrative voice, great word structure and you effectively used the writing devices of alliteration and metaphor. You managed to establish an entertaining non-fiction piece of writing. I like your phrases: "She'd arranged a glorious garden party to celebrate George's life before euthanizing, The sky was robin egg blue, spoke of how George had been the only unconditionally loving male she'd ever known and made his way directly to the grave of his buddy." Your essay is moving and I'm bawling like a fool. What a poignant true story. . I'd recommend your non-fiction story to other reviewers. I'd urge you to keep on writing with a creative pen. Please have a blessed day, my friend...Melissa.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Melissa, for a review that I will treasure. I so appreciate you taking so much time and caring enough to read George's story. You are always such a great help by letting me know what works for you. That helps so much. Blessings, Bev
Comment from mountainwriter49
Hi Bev
you've become quite the accomplished story teller
and this piece is stellar. I loved how well you developed
the story. I found myself actually being there at the wake
and could visualize the scenes, particularly the poignant ending
scene with Patches returning to the grave of George.
I do have one minor SPAG suggestion for you to consider:
He walked slowly d[b]eside her through
Wish I had a six to offer you for this exceptional piece.
Well done, my friend.
Ray
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Hi Bev
you've become quite the accomplished story teller
and this piece is stellar. I loved how well you developed
the story. I found myself actually being there at the wake
and could visualize the scenes, particularly the poignant ending
scene with Patches returning to the grave of George.
I do have one minor SPAG suggestion for you to consider:
He walked slowly d[b]eside her through
Wish I had a six to offer you for this exceptional piece.
Well done, my friend.
Ray
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Oopsy, was a little quick on the draw there LOL! Hey, thanks so much Ray for this awesome review. George's story has been in my head for a while now. I found when I finally sat down and wrote it, the piece flowed. So, George gets all the credit. Thanks for your kind acknowledgement that I am finally starting to find a good niche for myself. That's probably the reason I stunk so bad at the Japanese forms (hehehe). Your words and virtual six are treasured, my friend. Blessings, Bev
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I love it when things flow and am pleased this did for you. It felt "very right" from a reader's perspective. -rr
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Thank again, Ray! Those are the good times, yes. Xxx
Comment from Tramore
I love horses . This is one of the most beautiful horse stories I have ever read and I have read many! The descriptions are amazingly life- like, vivid and colorful.
The story is told simply and yet is extreemly touching
I almost wept visualizing Patches "Standing guard at a fallen comrade's tomb."
Great job!
Blessings.
Tramore
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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I love horses . This is one of the most beautiful horse stories I have ever read and I have read many! The descriptions are amazingly life- like, vivid and colorful.
The story is told simply and yet is extreemly touching
I almost wept visualizing Patches "Standing guard at a fallen comrade's tomb."
Great job!
Blessings.
Tramore
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much, Tramore for your awesome review! I really appreciate your words of support - means more than I can say. I'm glad that you stopped by to read's Catherine and George's story. Blessings, Bev
Comment from LisaMartino
This was so touching. It brought me to tears. Thank you for sharing this special moment. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Catherine who lost a special soul.
The flow of your story was moving. It kept me reading and engaged. Good job on word choice and convention.
Lisa
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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This was so touching. It brought me to tears. Thank you for sharing this special moment. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Catherine who lost a special soul.
The flow of your story was moving. It kept me reading and engaged. Good job on word choice and convention.
Lisa
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Thank you, Lisa, for caring enough to read George's story. I'm glad that he and Catherine were able to reach through the page and touch your life. Blessings, Bev
Comment from oNray
Nicely writer. This was an interesting story that was told in a tender respectful way. I think animal lovers and people lovers will like it
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Nicely writer. This was an interesting story that was told in a tender respectful way. I think animal lovers and people lovers will like it
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Thank you most kindly, oNray.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
what a heart-felt
story... I could
relate to this as
my daughter-in-law
lost her horse and
close family went
to be with her when
it was laid to rest
in the field which
had been its home
for 12 yrs.
So sad.
Margaret
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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what a heart-felt
story... I could
relate to this as
my daughter-in-law
lost her horse and
close family went
to be with her when
it was laid to rest
in the field which
had been its home
for 12 yrs.
So sad.
Margaret
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my story, Margaret. It sounds like you're a family of true horse lovers. Blessings, Bev
Comment from HPicasso
This is a brilliantly written and very poignant piece. Your description of the day and of George took me there with you.This is a very touching story to me. It seems like this was real to you and if it was I'm sorry your horse died. A beautiful tribute that they had for the horse.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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This is a brilliantly written and very poignant piece. Your description of the day and of George took me there with you.This is a very touching story to me. It seems like this was real to you and if it was I'm sorry your horse died. A beautiful tribute that they had for the horse.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much, HPicasso for your wonderful review! I'm so glad that you stopped by share George's story. Your words are truly wonderful to read. Blessings, Bev
