Stairway to Heaven
A Whitney-please see notes.26 total reviews
Comment from Kylie Bundy
I liked the structure you did on this, and your words were very creative. The picture was a great addition to this poem, and helped create a feeling of joining hands! Great work on this!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012
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I liked the structure you did on this, and your words were very creative. The picture was a great addition to this poem, and helped create a feeling of joining hands! Great work on this!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012
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Kylie my friend, much obliged, appreciate your time and I am pleased you like the poem, thank you very much.
Comment from Leonidus07
A great poem with a good message in mind. There was one structure thing that bothered me. Maybe put a period after souls, because after it is a separate idea, and I had to go back and reread. Great job otherwise :)
~Leo
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012
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A great poem with a good message in mind. There was one structure thing that bothered me. Maybe put a period after souls, because after it is a separate idea, and I had to go back and reread. Great job otherwise :)
~Leo
Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012
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Hello Leonidus, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, glad you like the poem, thank you very much. Also, thanks for the suggestion, would definitely look into it.
Comment from Espresso momma
Yes it would be great to surprize Him wouldn't it? This is a perfect whitney poem. Love the artwork too. Thank you Mr ameen, have a blessed week now.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012
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Yes it would be great to surprize Him wouldn't it? This is a perfect whitney poem. Love the artwork too. Thank you Mr ameen, have a blessed week now.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2012
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And I wish you the same my friend, so kind of you to encourage my work, much obliged and thank you very much.
Comment from Tillom Gliss
Hello, Ameen. I must say that I am glad I read this inspirational whitney before I lay my head to rest. I am still smiling and feel certain when I close my eyes I will see these many colored hands and will recall the words "Would be great to surprise God" and will falls peacefully to sleep with a grin. Love this!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Hello, Ameen. I must say that I am glad I read this inspirational whitney before I lay my head to rest. I am still smiling and feel certain when I close my eyes I will see these many colored hands and will recall the words "Would be great to surprise God" and will falls peacefully to sleep with a grin. Love this!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2012
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Hello Jo, my friend, I am pleased you like the whitney and I thank you for the lovely review, God bless you.
Comment from Peter@Poole
This is a well-composed Whitney in which you've embedded an inspirational message, Kamran. Somehow, I don't think God would be surprised because he's always got his finger on our pulses. He's certainly built in the possibility that we'll actually come good, if we choose the right. Peter
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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This is a well-composed Whitney in which you've embedded an inspirational message, Kamran. Somehow, I don't think God would be surprised because he's always got his finger on our pulses. He's certainly built in the possibility that we'll actually come good, if we choose the right. Peter
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Peter my friend, I thank you, I am pleased you like the poem; have a wonderful weekend my friend.
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I intend to but it's 'Inshallah' as usual. Have a great weekend yourself with your family. Peter
Comment from uniqueauthor
You said it all.
Even religion isn't united
And they're supposed to believe
The same thing.
And Politics is just politics ruled by a President
Instead of a Pope.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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You said it all.
Even religion isn't united
And they're supposed to believe
The same thing.
And Politics is just politics ruled by a President
Instead of a Pope.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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Hello Linda, welcome to the site and a very happy new year to you, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful insight, thank you very much, take care.
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You're welcome
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
Kamran, my friend, what an intriguing picture. Very profound. I am all about unity, always have been. Cannot see why other people don't see it the same way. God bless and continue with your great work, my friend! Holly
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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Kamran, my friend, what an intriguing picture. Very profound. I am all about unity, always have been. Cannot see why other people don't see it the same way. God bless and continue with your great work, my friend! Holly
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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Holly my friend, glad you like the tanka and the theme, appreciate your time and the encouragement, thank you my friend.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi ameen,
You have chosen the perfect picture for you Whitney. Your words resonate for me and I too think it would be good to surprise God. Your talented pen has written a fine poem....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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Hi ameen,
You have chosen the perfect picture for you Whitney. Your words resonate for me and I too think it would be good to surprise God. Your talented pen has written a fine poem....blessings, chey
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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chey my friend, I thank you for the wonderful review, I am very happy to read your kind comments.
Comment from Deejharrington
Reminds me a little of John Lennon's "Imagine". Too bad we all can't "join hands" even before we leave this earth. Just think what we could accomplish! Very well done.
deb
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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Reminds me a little of John Lennon's "Imagine". Too bad we all can't "join hands" even before we leave this earth. Just think what we could accomplish! Very well done.
deb
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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deb my friend, as always, I am grateful to you for the time and the wonderful review, thank you very much.
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from Inge_Meldgaard
Excellent! I read and wrote my first Whitney yesterday, so can appreciate a little more the skill with which you've written this one...and can only heartily agree with both your sentiment and the conclusion.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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Excellent! I read and wrote my first Whitney yesterday, so can appreciate a little more the skill with which you've written this one...and can only heartily agree with both your sentiment and the conclusion.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
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Hello Inge, my friend, I am glad you like the whitney, I feel comfortable in these short forms to express my thoughts, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review, thank you very much and God bless you.
