Comment from God's Writer

Excellent

Great story Bev.. Wonderful formulated. Wonderful images. You brought these people to life in my mind. Gave them, or most of them personalities and structure. Grand feelings used where and when needed. A terrific flow the this beautifully constructed story. I do hope it will be continued. OH also you kept my interest throughout the whole story. Bravo.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2012

Thanks, Eric. I appreciate your superb review of my chapter. I do plan on keeping the TEAM going through to the end of the mess they're currently in. Just when I think, perhaps, I'll just leave it alone, someone comes along to encourage me to keep writing. Thanks for being that person today. Blessings, Bev

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Sorry I'm late reading your story
but it's better l;ate then never right?
As always I enjoyed reading your work
your story never has a dulled moments and thats why I kept reading. thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2012

I appreciate you taking time to read my chapter, miss cookie. It's an honor to have your insights and interest. Thanks so much! Love, Bev

reply by misscookie on 03-Jan-2012

You are very welcome, take care.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

You describe Luke's abilities well
Listen, you hotshot ghosthunter - add comma for direct address
Excellent realistic-sounding dialogue with the sheriff
I can feel the emotion on both sides
What a dramatic final scene!! Brooke : -)

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012

Thanks so much, Brooke. I appreciate the time you took to so carefully read my chapter. I'll make that change pronto LOL! Thanks much for stopping by! Warm regards, Bev

Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran

Excellent

A good write, and interesting story line the story kept my interest and the picture blended well with the story. Thanks for sharing with me.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012

Thank YOU! I appreciate your generous review and the time you took to read my chapter. Hope you'll stay tuned for the next one, Cookson2. Warm regards, Bev

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, writingfundimension, a great job writing this chapter of your book where the sheriff doesn't appreciate the team and blames them for jim's disappearance

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012

Thank you ,my faithful friend, for continuing to support my novel. I so appreciate your generosity! Bev

Comment from JW

Excellent

Hmm. This chapter makes for an interesting development to your story - and it definitely makes for a good addition. One can only wonder what is going to happen next. Good Job. JW

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012

Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking time out to read, Jonathon. Your insights are always most appreciated, my friend. Warm regards, Bev

Comment from peggles

Excellent

This is a terrific continuation chapter full of suspense and what an ending
I thought this a bit mean to leave me hanging on don't be too long posting the next so I can see what happens storyline moves fast, makes sense,and was very entertaining
Well done

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012

Hi peggles. I am duly chastised for not submitting sooner LOL!!Thanks for your interest and excellent review. Means a lot...Bev

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Missed your chapters for a while, nice to see one again. Thanks for the foot note, needed here. Now the team becomes suspected of murder. Does not sound very great. Well written and held my attention all the way.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012

Thanks much, Ine. I truly appreciate your continued interest and support. Kind regards, Bev

reply by robina1978 on 02-Jan-2012

Very welcome Bev, Ine

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Wow, Bev, what a great chapter of suspense and what an ending hook!! You do so well with those and make me so want more to right...right now!The storyline moves fast, makes sense,and was entertaining.
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012

Thanks so much, Indy. I really appreciate your wonderful review. You are most kind to follow my chapters with such faithfulness. It's really most encouraging, my dear friend. Hugs, Bev

reply by IndianaIrish on 01-Jan-2012

Your so welcome...it's a pleasure to read your work :>)

reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012

Thanks, Indy. I hope to continue to grow into a better and stronger writer. Love the help I get from all of you! Bev

Comment from judiverse

Exceptional

This has so much excitement and tension I'm going with six stars. Interesting that the book title they are inspecting is now in Latin. The Sheriff is suspicious of the team and that is probably the attitude a lot of people would have about people studying the paranormal. Looks like Jim's encounter with the demonic presence has done him in. I liked the way you summarized the previous chapter in red. A great read! Reminds me of stories like "The Haunting of Hill House." judi

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012

Thanks so much, judi, for your extremely generous review! And it's so helpful to know what worked in the chapter. As it happens, The Haunting at Hill House is one of my all-time favorites. Much appreciate your generosity and support. Warm regards, Bev

reply by judiverse on 02-Jan-2012

You are welcome. Stories about haunted houses are always spine-tingling, and your story accomplishes that. judi

reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012

Thanks a lot, judi. Appreciate that! Bev