Gumball
Hot fun in the summertime26 total reviews
Comment from N.K. Wagner
This is a happy, lively portrait of a child with all sorts of energy and youthful high spirits. How wonderful that he's now learning to apologize for the unintended consequences of his enthusiasm. Perhaps someday he'll learn to think about them before hand and adjust his trajectory, at least. :D Nancy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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This is a happy, lively portrait of a child with all sorts of energy and youthful high spirits. How wonderful that he's now learning to apologize for the unintended consequences of his enthusiasm. Perhaps someday he'll learn to think about them before hand and adjust his trajectory, at least. :D Nancy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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hi Nancy! Thank you so much! Just another picture that caught my eye...so funny! You know it had to be Photo shopped. LOL! So glad you enjoyed this. :) Susan
Comment from JaphetMphande
Very good story about Bobby. he seemed a good boy doing all the physical exercises that he needed to keep fit he he knew that. Initially, I thought he would turn out to be a very good boy, but his habits provoked many as well.
The took everything to be done fast, running, fast, racing, fast... Maybe he learnt a lesson when he inconvenienced Mrs Pepper. I hope he did.
That was a good story, I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Very good story about Bobby. he seemed a good boy doing all the physical exercises that he needed to keep fit he he knew that. Initially, I thought he would turn out to be a very good boy, but his habits provoked many as well.
The took everything to be done fast, running, fast, racing, fast... Maybe he learnt a lesson when he inconvenienced Mrs Pepper. I hope he did.
That was a good story, I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Hi Japhet! Many thanks. I'm very glad you enjoyed this tale of a child who has Downs Syndrome. I tried to get inside his head, these kids are usually so lovable, but have problems...thank you again! :) Susan
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I love the exuberance of this write. It is a breath of fresh air to read and I could feel the pounding feet on the hot sticky pavement and see that wilting bouquet of flowers and a contrite little boy. Well done! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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I love the exuberance of this write. It is a breath of fresh air to read and I could feel the pounding feet on the hot sticky pavement and see that wilting bouquet of flowers and a contrite little boy. Well done! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Hi Kiwi...thank you very much. I just tried to do something happy...and this picture was so neat. I'm very glad you liked this...hugs! Susan
Comment from c_lucas
It's all a kid's world for youngsters up to the age of ten, then, over time, they are brought into the boring world's of adults. This is well written.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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It's all a kid's world for youngsters up to the age of ten, then, over time, they are brought into the boring world's of adults. This is well written.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Hi Charlie! Yes...how true! Kids lose their 'joy', or innocence all too soon. But kids with Downs seem to be bubbly longer...maybe they can't grow up as fast? I don't know. Just glad you enjoyed this...Susan
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You're welcome, Susan. Charlie
Comment from writingwithapencil
This is a pleasant and well written story. I enjoyed reading it and perhaps even reliving my own childhood innocence. Thanks for sharing such a playful piece of work.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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This is a pleasant and well written story. I enjoyed reading it and perhaps even reliving my own childhood innocence. Thanks for sharing such a playful piece of work.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2012
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Hi there!! Thank you, and it's a real pleasure when you enjoy my work...I am very grateful. Please keep safe and warm!! Susan
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely lovely story we have here old sport.
It kept me captivated throughout the read and is splendidly written ma'am.
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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This is an absolutely lovely story we have here old sport.
It kept me captivated throughout the read and is splendidly written ma'am.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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hi Chris! Wow...the one review so far...no one is reviewing it...so yours is extra extra special my friend. I'm just happy you enjoyed it. I was trying something fun...not so much funny, just happy. Thank you again. Susan
