Holiday and Holyday Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "A New Year Blessing"religious and holiday poetry
3 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Dove,
what a very hopeful wish for all to have a a Good New Year.
I'm impressed with what you said--
Begin each day building on the one before
Leave unhappy thoughts behind
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Hello Dove,
what a very hopeful wish for all to have a a Good New Year.
I'm impressed with what you said--
Begin each day building on the one before
Leave unhappy thoughts behind
Gert
Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Dear Gert, thank you for your review. Dove
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You are welcome
Comment from Adri7enne
A whole lot of good wishes, dove. I can understand how you might have wanted to move from one idea to the next,not wanting to leave anything out. Ah, I see now that it's an acrostic. That might explain how it seems a bit disjointed.
A happy new year to you, too.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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A whole lot of good wishes, dove. I can understand how you might have wanted to move from one idea to the next,not wanting to leave anything out. Ah, I see now that it's an acrostic. That might explain how it seems a bit disjointed.
A happy new year to you, too.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Dear Adri7enne, thank you for your review.Dove
Comment from thebluestar
Soulful and yet simply written with emotion. I love the artwork and colours that you have chosen, the whole poem rang a familiar bell with me. Net:)
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Soulful and yet simply written with emotion. I love the artwork and colours that you have chosen, the whole poem rang a familiar bell with me. Net:)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Dear thebluestar, thank you for your review.Dove
