Comment from ernesto escarro

Excellent

I seek a fortune

You have the vision to make altogether ambition to serve your mother.
Promising to fill your bag with money, jewels to offer.
You have to go to the city where this vision is realized.
You strongly said you fight against future.
Nice of you, a daughter or son to make your mamma happy.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011

Yeah I want to make my Momma happy as her first born and her daughter. Thanks aloternesto

reply by ernesto escarro on 30-Dec-2011

Thank you. A daughter like you is an idle in the family, rear and after. God bless.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011

I like that its great to hear that from you.

reply by ernesto escarro on 30-Dec-2011

I say it well. And it's true. There's sincerity in your write. Thanks for sharing. God bless.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011

Thanks alot dear friend. You motivate me to keep on writing more and more

reply by ernesto escarro on 30-Dec-2011

Yes, what is wrong with writing? It is just mind peculiarity that would take a plea on this. Thans for sharing. God bless.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011

God bless you too. Its a pleasure

reply by ernesto escarro on 30-Dec-2011

Thank you. I am still to say..., God bless.

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2011

Wow! say more, comment more, write more and climb the ladder. I am new in the site and this is my first post. I am from Kenya

reply by ernesto escarro on 30-Dec-2011

Thanks for informing. Just keep on. God bless.

Comment from mmayen

Exceptional

Bravo... Really liked how ambition is expressed with a strong desire to conquer.
I got the meaning of this poetry and loved the order in which you relayed it.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011

I am so greatful for your commennt. This is my first post in the site and hope our relationsip will grow.I wrote this when i felt so much homesick