Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from judiverse
Great Chapter, barbara. Lots of excitement with the dog bite and trip to emergency. Anna still can't get over blaming herself and thinking she's a bad mother, but she's had that driven into her so often in the past it's hard for her to change. Well described action and characterization. judi
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Great Chapter, barbara. Lots of excitement with the dog bite and trip to emergency. Anna still can't get over blaming herself and thinking she's a bad mother, but she's had that driven into her so often in the past it's hard for her to change. Well described action and characterization. judi
Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from October21
nice structure
flows great
love the picture
you are very talented indeed!
no mistakes so far
great work
Merry Christmas
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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nice structure
flows great
love the picture
you are very talented indeed!
no mistakes so far
great work
Merry Christmas
Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Whew!! He saved Michael and all is well but man is she ever paranoid. Things happen all the time it does not mean she is a bad mother. I guess after going through what she did she will need some time to adjust!!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Whew!! He saved Michael and all is well but man is she ever paranoid. Things happen all the time it does not mean she is a bad mother. I guess after going through what she did she will need some time to adjust!!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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It will take Anna a long time to adjust. I appreciate your kind review.
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Sigh, I guess so.
Comment from c_lucas
Anna is great for accepting the blame for everything. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Anna is great for accepting the blame for everything. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome,Barbara. Charlie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
hey barbara, i enjoyed reading this chapter, i always look forward to sundays because you post a chapter, i noticed a couple of spags. lose the space for the forearm and you have bailey spelled as baily also. look forward to your next post.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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hey barbara, i enjoyed reading this chapter, i always look forward to sundays because you post a chapter, i noticed a couple of spags. lose the space for the forearm and you have bailey spelled as baily also. look forward to your next post.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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DArn!!!! I am on those. Thank you for the eagle eye. I appreciate it.
