Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Part two Chapter 14"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from TammyGail
This was simply amazing these chapters just keep getting better Barbara - very well written, compelling your dialog is great for keeping your reads att - thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2011
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This was simply amazing these chapters just keep getting better Barbara - very well written, compelling your dialog is great for keeping your reads att - thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from emmaysavage
You did a good job of showing how things proceed in the ER. I also liked your presentation of Anna's doubts and fears about her mothering abilities.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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You did a good job of showing how things proceed in the ER. I also liked your presentation of Anna's doubts and fears about her mothering abilities.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sunnilicious
"Lonely Hearts Meet, Part two Chapter 14' is good. The dialogue keeping going... and Troy now is helpless. I like the turn of events. It's not Anna's fault, but I could see her curled into an emotional ball over this. Such a long wait. Nice work.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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"Lonely Hearts Meet, Part two Chapter 14' is good. The dialogue keeping going... and Troy now is helpless. I like the turn of events. It's not Anna's fault, but I could see her curled into an emotional ball over this. Such a long wait. Nice work.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Poor Anna, even have very low your self-esteem. Was a chapter full of incidents and emotions, also concern. I liked much this Barbara, congrats.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Poor Anna, even have very low your self-esteem. Was a chapter full of incidents and emotions, also concern. I liked much this Barbara, congrats.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from livingwords
You did a great job with the dialogue on this one. It's smooth and consistent. I was a little concerned the voices were too similar, but, by the end, it was fine. You keep getting better! Dan :))
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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You did a great job with the dialogue on this one. It's smooth and consistent. I was a little concerned the voices were too similar, but, by the end, it was fine. You keep getting better! Dan :))
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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I will keep an eye on the voices. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ScarletClearwater
Another great addition to the book. This continuation holds true to the emotion of this piece. Great job with the dialogue and the structure.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Another great addition to the book. This continuation holds true to the emotion of this piece. Great job with the dialogue and the structure.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Merry Christmas, Barbara, and a Happy New Year. I enjoy keeping up with Troy and Anna.
"I've already figured it out(;) I'm a failure as a mother."
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Merry Christmas, Barbara, and a Happy New Year. I enjoy keeping up with Troy and Anna.
"I've already figured it out(;) I'm a failure as a mother."
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Poor Anna, her self confidence is so bad she believes she is a bad mom. Great job as always my friend. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Poor Anna, her self confidence is so bad she believes she is a bad mom. Great job as always my friend. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from pickthorn
This was an interesting chapter with Troy getting dog bit protecting Michael. I missed a few chapters of this story. I'm curious about the concern for Troy's blood getting on Anna or Michael. Does Troy have aids or something?
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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This was an interesting chapter with Troy getting dog bit protecting Michael. I missed a few chapters of this story. I'm curious about the concern for Troy's blood getting on Anna or Michael. Does Troy have aids or something?
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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I am not sure why I received a three rating. You said it was an interesting chapter and offered nothing that needed to be corrected. Troy has hep B which was established in an earlier post.
Comment from abbasjoy
I have been following this story and really like the progression. This just adds another dimension to the plot and shows how lacking in self esteem abused women become.
The first thing Anna thinks is that it is her fault, because it has been so ingrained within her from her husbands abusive behavior and constant put downs. Again I must thank you for bringing this topic out in the open so that women in this situation can recognise it for what it is, and the lies that they are constantly bombarded with, and hopefully recognise that they are not what others with their warped minds make them out to be, but instead they are created in the image and likeness of a God who loved them enough to send His only Son to die for them. Great work!
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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I have been following this story and really like the progression. This just adds another dimension to the plot and shows how lacking in self esteem abused women become.
The first thing Anna thinks is that it is her fault, because it has been so ingrained within her from her husbands abusive behavior and constant put downs. Again I must thank you for bringing this topic out in the open so that women in this situation can recognise it for what it is, and the lies that they are constantly bombarded with, and hopefully recognise that they are not what others with their warped minds make them out to be, but instead they are created in the image and likeness of a God who loved them enough to send His only Son to die for them. Great work!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
