Melody Bells
Quatrains16 total reviews
Comment from laren
Beautiful and musical poem, the bells ring and rejoice the hearts, the Christ Child is born and a time of joy and reflection.
I was delighted to read,
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
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Beautiful and musical poem, the bells ring and rejoice the hearts, the Christ Child is born and a time of joy and reflection.
I was delighted to read,
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
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Thanks, Laren. This is a very helpful and special review. Merry Christmas!
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Merry Christmas! It was my entire pleassure, thank you for sharing,
Laren
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Bless you, Laren. Hope you keep reading my work:)
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Blessings for you too, Sure, I'll be reading your work.
Laren
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I glanced through some of your work, but Laren, I can't speak Spanish, ha!--wish I could. Maybe there is something in there English, or maybe if I try the few Spanish words I know, I can figure the poem out:)
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Thank you Donnadiann, I wish my English would be better to post someting in your language, but it's not, language structures are so different. Don't worry, I really enjoyed reading your poems.
thank you,
Laren
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Thank you, please keep reading, my favorites of my work are: "Homesick Marine", "Perhaps a Dream", and "You, God". You might like these:) I'll keep trying to figure your poems out--translate, I wished I could, ha!
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I'll be reading them, take for sure,
Laren
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Smiles!
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Love this line in particular:
'melodies bringing the senses to sedation'
You bring out a real Christmas feel with your descriptions.
Best wishes, earl
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
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Love this line in particular:
'melodies bringing the senses to sedation'
You bring out a real Christmas feel with your descriptions.
Best wishes, earl
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
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This is just the kind of review that writers like me, like to get--very encouraging and a friendly. Merry Christmas!
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely marvelous Christmas poem and entry in the contest that we have here old sport.
Well done indeed with this splendid work here ma'am.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
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This is an absolutely marvelous Christmas poem and entry in the contest that we have here old sport.
Well done indeed with this splendid work here ma'am.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Chris Tee, this is a worthy review. Makes me want to keep writing. Merry Christmas!
Comment from ernesto escarro
Melody Bells
Ringing bells enjoyable to hear at a time.
It reduce irritation, lifting up your hearts.
Sigh, the Christmas bells ring.
The brand new hope is there, as you hear the
children ringing and carolers, the birth of Christ.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
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Melody Bells
Ringing bells enjoyable to hear at a time.
It reduce irritation, lifting up your hearts.
Sigh, the Christmas bells ring.
The brand new hope is there, as you hear the
children ringing and carolers, the birth of Christ.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, ernesto, for reviewing. It is a good review and I'm so glad it means something to you, the reader, I'd hoped it would. I like that your review is so detailed, it helps me know how my writing comes across. Merry Christmas!
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Tou are welcome for your best writing. God bless. I like it. THanks.
Comment from Razz
Through icy air our cherry cheeks glow
from listening to the metal ting of high and low;
church bells, sleigh bells, children ringing too.
Carolers ringing of Christ's birth, all hope brand new.
Very well done.
So wonderfully full of life.
Imagery is grand.
Colors are beautiful.
Thank you for such a beautiful witness.
Razz
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Through icy air our cherry cheeks glow
from listening to the metal ting of high and low;
church bells, sleigh bells, children ringing too.
Carolers ringing of Christ's birth, all hope brand new.
Very well done.
So wonderfully full of life.
Imagery is grand.
Colors are beautiful.
Thank you for such a beautiful witness.
Razz
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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This is an amazing review. I appreciate it so much, Razz.
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You're welcome, donna.
So very beautiful
Razz
Comment from rchitwood
Very lovely Quatrain and has good description and images of the bells. I love to hear bells chime and you describe that sound so vivid.Your poem is creative and follows the rules of the contest a good contender.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Very lovely Quatrain and has good description and images of the bells. I love to hear bells chime and you describe that sound so vivid.Your poem is creative and follows the rules of the contest a good contender.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you, Rita, this review is very helpful and thoughtful.
