Love and Phoenix Tears
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Comment from susand3022
You know, it's too bad that Lily can't just douse the entire Slytherin table at dinner or something... wouldn't that have just been easier? Dose them all with Nice Potion??? They'll all go around dreaming of gardening or something! LOL
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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You know, it's too bad that Lily can't just douse the entire Slytherin table at dinner or something... wouldn't that have just been easier? Dose them all with Nice Potion??? They'll all go around dreaming of gardening or something! LOL
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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LOL dreaming of gardening!
Comment from aaliyan malik
OH WELL YOUR WRITING IS GREAT YOUR THINKING AND RHYMING IS BRILLIANT THE COLOR LOOK VERY GOOD AND THE SAME IS FOR THE BACKGROUND YOU CAN DO MORE BEST BUT IT IS THE BEST WHICH I HAVE EVER READ DO IT MORE BETTER YOU WILL BE THE BEST DO YOUR BEST I think no one can do better than you you can do more good best and this was brilliant epic of paper
OH WELL YOUR WRITING IS GREAT YOUR THINKING AND RHYMING IS BRILLIANT THE COLOR LOOK VERY GOOD AND THE SAME IS FOR THE BACKGROUND YOU CAN DO MORE BEST BUT IT IS THE BEST WHICH I HAVE EVER READ DO IT MORE BETTER YOU WILL BE THE BEST DO YOUR BEST I think no one can do better than you you can do more good best and this was brilliant epic of paper
OH WELL YOUR WRITING IS GREAT YOUR THINKING AND RHYMING IS BRILLIANT THE COLOR LOOK VERY GOOD AND THE SAME IS FOR THE BACKGROUND YOU CAN DO MORE BEST BUT IT IS THE BEST WHICH I HAVE EVER READ DO IT MORE BETTER YOU WILL BE THE BEST DO YOUR BEST I think no one can do better than you you can do more good best and this was brilliant epic of paper
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OH WELL YOUR WRITING IS GREAT YOUR THINKING AND RHYMING IS BRILLIANT THE COLOR LOOK VERY GOOD AND THE SAME IS FOR THE BACKGROUND YOU CAN DO MORE BEST BUT IT IS THE BEST WHICH I HAVE EVER READ DO IT MORE BETTER YOU WILL BE THE BEST DO YOUR BEST I think no one can do better than you you can do more good best and this was brilliant epic of paper
OH WELL YOUR WRITING IS GREAT YOUR THINKING AND RHYMING IS BRILLIANT THE COLOR LOOK VERY GOOD AND THE SAME IS FOR THE BACKGROUND YOU CAN DO MORE BEST BUT IT IS THE BEST WHICH I HAVE EVER READ DO IT MORE BETTER YOU WILL BE THE BEST DO YOUR BEST I think no one can do better than you you can do more good best and this was brilliant epic of paper
OH WELL YOUR WRITING IS GREAT YOUR THINKING AND RHYMING IS BRILLIANT THE COLOR LOOK VERY GOOD AND THE SAME IS FOR THE BACKGROUND YOU CAN DO MORE BEST BUT IT IS THE BEST WHICH I HAVE EVER READ DO IT MORE BETTER YOU WILL BE THE BEST DO YOUR BEST I think no one can do better than you you can do more good best and this was brilliant epic of paper
Comment Written 12-Dec-2011
Comment from Torrence Winter
This was a nice tale set in the harry potter world. You have given it plenty to begin with that moves the story forward. There was no spag to this that I could find. Hope to read more soon.
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This was a nice tale set in the harry potter world. You have given it plenty to begin with that moves the story forward. There was no spag to this that I could find. Hope to read more soon.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
