Hold Your Dream
A Naani15 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
Beautiful Naani, Donna!! It has all of the element of the style. How perfectly you have spoken of your dreams and the right to hold onto them!!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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Beautiful Naani, Donna!! It has all of the element of the style. How perfectly you have spoken of your dreams and the right to hold onto them!!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2011
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You got the gist, you go girl. LOL!
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Yayyyy!
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:):)
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi donnadiann,
This is a lovely naani for the contest. You have made stunning word choices to express yourself and the last line is melancholy and a perfect end to your poem. Well done and good luck in the contest....bless you, chey
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Hi donnadiann,
This is a lovely naani for the contest. You have made stunning word choices to express yourself and the last line is melancholy and a perfect end to your poem. Well done and good luck in the contest....bless you, chey
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thanks, Chey, for an excellent review that is so helpful to me:)
Comment from babylonia
donna,
sigh ... the beautiful thing about clouds is they are fleeting but oh so beautiful. made me smile. the picture is excellent. best of luck here.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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donna,
sigh ... the beautiful thing about clouds is they are fleeting but oh so beautiful. made me smile. the picture is excellent. best of luck here.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thanks for such a sweet review that is also cheerful:)
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you are welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from percival86jack
A very poignant description of life... blink and it's gone. It's way too short! Much luck in the contest... hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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A very poignant description of life... blink and it's gone. It's way too short! Much luck in the contest... hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Almost....mostly opportunities...I was trying to convey, but you got closer to the meaning than anyone, I believe. But the other, life... is also true. Thanks so much, Jack, nice review:)
Comment from poetstar
I adore clouds, so this poem meant even more to me. The picture is so great with the words. I enjoyed every word of your poem, and I hope you win the contest. I especially like the last line about then it was gone. They do flee fast. Sometimes I see such a lovely shape, and then it changes or leaves. Your Friend Poet Star
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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I adore clouds, so this poem meant even more to me. The picture is so great with the words. I enjoyed every word of your poem, and I hope you win the contest. I especially like the last line about then it was gone. They do flee fast. Sometimes I see such a lovely shape, and then it changes or leaves. Your Friend Poet Star
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much, Poet Star. Just thought I'd write a simple light-hearted poem with meaning:)
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I loved your meaningful and lovely poem. Your writings so often have such deep and wonderful meaning. Thanks for sharing. Your friend Poet Star
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Smiles, Smiles!!
Comment from stephybs
I really like this little Nanni it reminds me of everything I would say and do. And I often do sigh and dream while fixated to the beautiful sky line. Very well thought up! Stephanie
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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I really like this little Nanni it reminds me of everything I would say and do. And I often do sigh and dream while fixated to the beautiful sky line. Very well thought up! Stephanie
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thank you so most, I believe you did get the meaning, that's great. Have a great weekend:)
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
A very good morning to you Donna
That was such a lovely poem, well written and a very fine poem for the contest, my best to you. Loyd
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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A very good morning to you Donna
That was such a lovely poem, well written and a very fine poem for the contest, my best to you. Loyd
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thanks a lot, Loyd, and have a cheerful day:)
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My pleasure, Loyd
Comment from peggles
I thought your message
came through clearly
This was a pleasure to read
Well done
This is a lovely verse
I enjoyed reading it very much
It is cleverly written and
exceptionally well presented
the art chosen is perfect
best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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I thought your message
came through clearly
This was a pleasure to read
Well done
This is a lovely verse
I enjoyed reading it very much
It is cleverly written and
exceptionally well presented
the art chosen is perfect
best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 09-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much, Peggles, for this pleasant review.
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem in 23 syllables and 4 lines is in excellent naani form.
I like the alliterative pairing of caught and cloud, beauty and blinked
An interesting commentary on the transitory nature of beauty :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Your poem in 23 syllables and 4 lines is in excellent naani form.
I like the alliterative pairing of caught and cloud, beauty and blinked
An interesting commentary on the transitory nature of beauty :-) Brooke
Comment Written 08-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Brooke. This is a very nteresting review...transitory nature of beauty, that's nice. It gives more insight to my poem. However, there is a human element to my poem, and maybe your last line said it best:)
Comment from mumsyone
Nice naani poem; easy to picture that cloud you're speaking of and how someone (especially a poet) can get lost in it, and dream. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Nice naani poem; easy to picture that cloud you're speaking of and how someone (especially a poet) can get lost in it, and dream. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, I'm glad you like my poem and I love the review:)
