Love and Phoenix Tears
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Slug Club"A Harry Potter fanfiction!
4 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Seriously, you could be mistaken for J.K.Rowling. This harkens back to the sweet early writing of the first books. I am back at Hogwarts. But when is Lucius Malfoy and Snape going to show up? Good writing. Karen
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Seriously, you could be mistaken for J.K.Rowling. This harkens back to the sweet early writing of the first books. I am back at Hogwarts. But when is Lucius Malfoy and Snape going to show up? Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
Comment from susand3022
It's going to be fun seeing how these two start out... the whole crew really... There could have been an entire set of "Potter" books before Harry Potter was even thought of... the rise of Voldermort!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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It's going to be fun seeing how these two start out... the whole crew really... There could have been an entire set of "Potter" books before Harry Potter was even thought of... the rise of Voldermort!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Yes! OMG I would love to write that story, too. I wish I could be as inspired by my own ideas as I am by JK's! hahah
Comment from rtobaygo
WELL DONE. YOUR DIALOGUE FITS WELL WITHIN THE HARRY POTTER SERIES. YOU HAVE A LOT OF CHARACTER NAMES BEING BANTERED ABOUT, MAKING IT A SLOW, CAREFUL READ LEST YOU MISS WHAT THE CHARACTERS WERE BRING TO PORTION OF THE STORY
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WELL DONE. YOUR DIALOGUE FITS WELL WITHIN THE HARRY POTTER SERIES. YOU HAVE A LOT OF CHARACTER NAMES BEING BANTERED ABOUT, MAKING IT A SLOW, CAREFUL READ LEST YOU MISS WHAT THE CHARACTERS WERE BRING TO PORTION OF THE STORY
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
I spotted only one spag.
that and wasn't sure what to say. She knew she couldn't say what first came to mind - that she had no idea where Potter was, and she couldn't possibl[y]
care less - and it wouldn't be right for her to complain
Interesting to write a take off on Harry Potter.
Roberta
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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I spotted only one spag.
that and wasn't sure what to say. She knew she couldn't say what first came to mind - that she had no idea where Potter was, and she couldn't possibl[y]
care less - and it wouldn't be right for her to complain
Interesting to write a take off on Harry Potter.
Roberta
Comment Written 05-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011
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oops on the error - fixed it! thanks so much for the comment as always :)
I used to think that fan fiction was a waste of time, but I actually find it a lot of fun! It helps clear writers block for me :)
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What is fan fiction?
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fan fiction is basically a genre where you can write about the characters/world that someone else has created (e.g., me writing about the world JK Rowling made up. thanks again for the comment!
