Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Hi Ine great chapter this one. Very well written with a good flow. What a sad way to start your honeymoon.
It sounds if you're arrived in a bad movie.
It is a honeymoon you'll never forget. I look forward to your next chapter, it was a pleasure to read. Liefs, Fia

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Robina. how awful! That was some honeymoon to spend. Yikes, what on earth were those folks thinking? I hope you got to spend some quality time somewhere.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine. After we cleaned it was bareble or quite good as we had each other for days on end.

reply by Gungalo on 05-Dec-2011

Sigh ...

Comment from Chris Tee

Excellent

Wow! Which family messed the cottage up like that close or distant. Well I would give them stick for that.
I enjoyed your engagement chapter and it is amazing you still had time to make a lot of love.
Well done.

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine

Comment from Janie King

Excellent

What a nightmare..Were all the animals still there? It was not exactly what you had planned for sure...good chapter..definitely an experience you won't forget. God bless.

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine. No. no animals thanks heaven for that.

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

This was not such a good start, having to deal with all the mess in the cottage. So many animals! Goodness. I'm glad you persevered, though. I look forward to hearing about your time in Scotland. Have a lovely day! Av :o)

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

Another great chapter robina - I enjoyed this chapter much loved your honesty the most in the ending - How true it really is sometimes seeing to much of them - sometimes its nice to just be away -

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review my friend. Warmly and hugs, Ine

Comment from ephraim crud, COS.

Excellent

geez, that were a pretty grim start! w
ell, at least it showed the ol' fella
must've loved you -i'd've legged it! lol.
very much enjoyed this, for some warped
reason. thank you for sharing, Dutchess Ine.
marvellous stuff! warmly, xxx, eph.

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review. Take care,
Ine. Yep, he did and does.

Comment from oNray

Excellent

Well written and the book grows. As we have said some of the strangest marriges have become the strongest. Shame on you saying no low ratings- you diden't get to tell the teacher "no failing grades" when you handed in your work LOL:)

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review. Take care,
Ine. Might have given it a try back in those days.

Comment from alexisleech

Excellent

I can imagine how you felt when you arrived, especially with your new husband beside you to witness such an embarrassing example of your parent's lack of care and hygiene. I can sympathise completely having had a mother who went from squeaky clean (almost obsessive so)to one who happily slept in a urine soaked bed, due to the effect of alcoholism. Thank God for understanding husbands!

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review. Take care,
Ine. My mother used to be like yours. Maybe that was what caused it.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this si very well written, robina, a great job writing this story about the honeymoon that you and your husband had, i enjoyed reading it and sorry you had to clean up so much on your honeymoon.

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 Comment Written 05-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2011

Thanks for your kind and generous review. Take care,
Ine