Comment from elliejean

Excellent

It is Is beautiful picture. I love your poem. Love is always great. It is better when it heals a hurt soul and body. Great work

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Thank you, Elliejean. I appreciate your comments...Happy Holidays. Bob

Comment from amada

Excellent

A great love poem. Joyful beginning but in the midst there is a sense of sadness that taunted your reverie. A very touching and honest work. My fave phrase " God's plan hurled me onward
to discover your world in mine."

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Thanks so much,Amada. Happy Holidays! Bob

Comment from rchitwood

Exceptional

Very good romance poem here my friend I love the words and how they create such strong felt images between two people.The last verse is my favorite.Caressed my bruised soul so profound.I envy you your talent as a writer.Your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Hi, Rita. Coming from a class poet like you, I am really moved. and a six stars too. Wow! Thanks so much! Happy Holidays...Bob

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

And still other find it and don't know what to do with it. Throwing it away like an old shoe never to have it again. Well done with this one, Buck

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Thanks, Buck. Bob

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

I enjoyed this beautiful poem so much. I felt the deep emotion behind the words, and thought you'd chosen to say just enough, not too much, allowing the reader to participate in the creation of mood and mystery and the joy of finding just the right one to love. This is truly beautiful and meaningful and shows what a soft-hearted artist you really are. I look forward to more of this.

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Thanks, Merri. I do so appreciate your comments. Happy Holidays! Bob

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Bob - Your poem about meeting your wife is lovely.
You're not only great at writing prose, but poetry too. I really enjoyed this. Kat

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

I am so glad,Kat. Thanks so much and Happy Holidays! Bob

Comment from stephybs

Excellent

I love your truly wonderful poetry that you have written for your wife. And the art work with your choice of color also shows of really true spiritual union. Perfect! Stephanie

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Thanks so much, Steph. I appreciate this very much. Bob

Comment from God's Writer

Excellent

A truly beautiful poem of love. A great piece to experience. I really enjoyed your approach to this poem. Very direct. A wonderful poem to read and review.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Thanks so much, Erick. I appreciate your time and comment...Happy Holidays! Bob

reply by God's Writer on 03-Dec-2011

May you and yours have a merry holiday season.

Comment from Nanette Mary

Excellent

Hullo Bob ....

It is good to see you again and I enjoyed what you have written in this free-thought presentation. Surely, there is much hidden behind your words and yet, for your readers, this makes an enjoyable presentation.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Thank you, Nanette. Good to hear from you as well. Happy Holidays! Bob

Comment from Pen&Ink

Exceptional

Hello Bob,

Excellently crafted love poem. Wonderful alliteration along with clever rhymes make this one well worth the six points!

Woeful years plagued mindless
masquerades in misty moonlit charades.
Empty nights and deserted beaches
callously taunted my reverie.

Very nice.

Ray

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011

Thanks so very much, Ray. I appreciat eyour comments as well as the six big stars. Happy Holidays! Bob