Joy
When I met my wife.76 total reviews
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Hi Bob,
I like this.
Nice
Romantic
Beautiful artwork.
Nice title
Too bad you didn't enter it in the love poem contest.
I like your last stanza best.
Katie
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Hi Bob,
I like this.
Nice
Romantic
Beautiful artwork.
Nice title
Too bad you didn't enter it in the love poem contest.
I like your last stanza best.
Katie
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Katie. Coming from a super poet like you are, I am elated. Happy Holiday...Bob
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Hi Bob,
You're welcome. And Happy Holidays.
Katie
Comment from Judian James
I love reading a poem from your pen, Bob! This is beautiful and I especially loved: "God's plan hurled me onward
to discover your world in mine
at the brink of my fading sunset." How wonderful for you!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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I love reading a poem from your pen, Bob! This is beautiful and I especially loved: "God's plan hurled me onward
to discover your world in mine
at the brink of my fading sunset." How wonderful for you!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Jude. Happy Holidays! Bob
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The same to you Bob! I'm so pleased to be a fan of yours and love it when you post a poem or essay!
Comment from Matoshka
It is true love you speak of my friend. The one that quits and calms a troubled heart, gives love that heals. In the fading sunset of your years, you are both so blessed. Hold on to each and never let go. This brought tears to my eyes. Blessings my friend.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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It is true love you speak of my friend. The one that quits and calms a troubled heart, gives love that heals. In the fading sunset of your years, you are both so blessed. Hold on to each and never let go. This brought tears to my eyes. Blessings my friend.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Ann. Happy Holidays to you and yours too. Bob
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You are so welcome Bob. Happy Holidays to you and yours as well. Blessings my friend.
Comment from WilliamDeen
Your poem, Joy, tells an interesting story. You are oh so correct. Sounds like you and I are a few of the lucky ones. We found our true loves, some never will.
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Your poem, Joy, tells an interesting story. You are oh so correct. Sounds like you and I are a few of the lucky ones. We found our true loves, some never will.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Yes, Billy, I did...and good for you too. Thanks and Happy Holidays! Bob
Comment from ameen786
Hello Bob, my friend, a beautiful verse, full of rich vocabulary and superb phrasings, "At the brink of my fading sunset,"--to point one, great flow/rhythm, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Hello Bob, my friend, a beautiful verse, full of rich vocabulary and superb phrasings, "At the brink of my fading sunset,"--to point one, great flow/rhythm, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, ameen...Blessings...Bob
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello there Bob.
That is one beautiful poem. Very easy to read, such an enchanting message of love, great work. I also liked your footnotes. LOyd
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Hello there Bob.
That is one beautiful poem. Very easy to read, such an enchanting message of love, great work. I also liked your footnotes. LOyd
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Loyd. Happy Holidays. Bob
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Thank you Bob. I have Mr. Pumpkinhead on line now, it is already published, just seeing what everyone thinks. Loyd
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Good for you, Loyd. I'll have a look. Did you self-publish? Bob
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No. It was done free, so the quality is not the best. But, at least it's out there. LOyd
Comment from chita
Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-I love your poem and how you share those precious moments with us--I love where you write(Your smile carressed my bruised soul) and you found true love---well penned-great job.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-I love your poem and how you share those precious moments with us--I love where you write(Your smile carressed my bruised soul) and you found true love---well penned-great job.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much,Chita....Bob
Comment from Larrypic11
Wow! This is a beautiful testament, Bob. The stanza staring with "Woeful" is especially well done, rich in imagery and meaning. Congratulations on several levels:-) Be well. Larry
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Wow! This is a beautiful testament, Bob. The stanza staring with "Woeful" is especially well done, rich in imagery and meaning. Congratulations on several levels:-) Be well. Larry
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Larry. I do so appreciate that. Happy Holidays! Bob
Comment from rawahymis
Blessed are those with open arms
Blessed are those with receptive hearts
Blessed are those with abundant kindness
Blessed are those with perceptive minds
Blessed are those who see and write the right
Blessed art thou and thine
Blessed are these blessed days which on us befall
Blessed are these days and all to come
rawahy
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Blessed are those with open arms
Blessed are those with receptive hearts
Blessed are those with abundant kindness
Blessed are those with perceptive minds
Blessed are those who see and write the right
Blessed art thou and thine
Blessed are these blessed days which on us befall
Blessed are these days and all to come
rawahy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, rawahymis. Blessings to and for you too. Bob
Comment from Linda England Bonam
That was simply beautiful, Bob. I am sure your wife fell in love with it the minute she saw it! Great wording and a warm fuzzy feeling all over it! Great job!
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That was simply beautiful, Bob. I am sure your wife fell in love with it the minute she saw it! Great wording and a warm fuzzy feeling all over it! Great job!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Linda. I do so appreciate your comment. Happy Holidays....Bob
