Joy
When I met my wife.76 total reviews
Comment from Helvi2
Talk about a deep poem my friend, you should write them more often! This is a beaituful poem with lovely vocabulary.
You really expressed the feelings of the heart. I love every verse, but the last one is my favorite.
I have to get back here more often to read and write. I still plan to read more about Joey and his sister. You created quite a story there. I can't remember the title of your book though! Sorry about my memory! LOL
This poem deserves a six and I'm nore than happy rating it that way! :o) Helvi
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Talk about a deep poem my friend, you should write them more often! This is a beaituful poem with lovely vocabulary.
You really expressed the feelings of the heart. I love every verse, but the last one is my favorite.
I have to get back here more often to read and write. I still plan to read more about Joey and his sister. You created quite a story there. I can't remember the title of your book though! Sorry about my memory! LOL
This poem deserves a six and I'm nore than happy rating it that way! :o) Helvi
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Awww. Thanks so much,Helvi. A six! You are too kind. I appreciate hearing from you...Yes, Joey and Beth...Book is called "Falling Up The Stairs" I am on chapter 32...figure about eight more to go to completion. Thanks for remembering. Happy Holidays, Helvi! Bob
Comment from babylonia
bob,
i just wrote a really nice review. pushed save button and voila ... it was gone. LOL i hate when that happens. what a beautiful tribute to love. sometimes good ... sometimes bad.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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bob,
i just wrote a really nice review. pushed save button and voila ... it was gone. LOL i hate when that happens. what a beautiful tribute to love. sometimes good ... sometimes bad.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 04-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Hi there, stranger! LOL...Good to see you around again. I have been away quite a bit myself..I will try to watch for your work again. Thanks for your time and this review. Happy Holidays! Bob
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bob,
thanks for the wonderful review. i just finished a novel for nano so i'm doing pretty good. i hope to finish a novel i started last year. happy holidays for you.
love,
barbara
Comment from ~Sarina Ali-McBride~
This is wonderful. As always, you write a wonderful and enjoyable poem that does not need to be changed in any way. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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This is wonderful. As always, you write a wonderful and enjoyable poem that does not need to be changed in any way. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Hello, Sarina. How nice of you to review this for me. Been a long long time since i've seen you on here. Blessings. Bob
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Bob,
This is exquisite. Such an emotional, heartrending story within your poem. You have enhanced it beautifully with clever alliteration and the images are so clear. It is a most enjoyable poem to read. Giddy
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Bob,
This is exquisite. Such an emotional, heartrending story within your poem. You have enhanced it beautifully with clever alliteration and the images are so clear. It is a most enjoyable poem to read. Giddy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Giddy. Bless you for your wonderful review. Happy Holidays to you and yours. Bob
Comment from Ann Smith
The poem had me at the very first line. The rhythm imitates the rhythm of true love...steady and yet surprising. I've not been on fanstory much lately because I broke my shoulder. I'm typing with one hand, but that's better than typing with one finger. I hope you have been well. Dicy
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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The poem had me at the very first line. The rhythm imitates the rhythm of true love...steady and yet surprising. I've not been on fanstory much lately because I broke my shoulder. I'm typing with one hand, but that's better than typing with one finger. I hope you have been well. Dicy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Hi, Dicy. Long time since I've heard from you...Thanks so much for the six stars and the wonderful comment. Sorryabout your wing. Hope it heals soon. Happy Holidays! Bob
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Happy holidays. Dicy
Comment from Realist101
How very lucky you and she are Bob! This is so beautiful...I bet your better half loves this! VERY good poetry! Have you seen "Bridges of Madison County"? I cry every time I watch it. Her kids were so annoying tho. ")) Susan
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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How very lucky you and she are Bob! This is so beautiful...I bet your better half loves this! VERY good poetry! Have you seen "Bridges of Madison County"? I cry every time I watch it. Her kids were so annoying tho. ")) Susan
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Hi, Susan. Yes, I saw Bridges a long time ago. great movie. I'm glad you liked the poem. Thank you. Take care of yourself Happy Holidays! Bob
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Bob
What an absolutely lovely love poem.
Your early stanzas give a melancholy feeling of loneliness.
Then we experience the joy when you meet the girl who was to become your wife.
I can see why the poem is called Joy.
Great presentation, too.
Ron
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Hi Bob
What an absolutely lovely love poem.
Your early stanzas give a melancholy feeling of loneliness.
Then we experience the joy when you meet the girl who was to become your wife.
I can see why the poem is called Joy.
Great presentation, too.
Ron
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Ron. coming from you, I am truly encouraged. Happy Holidays...Bob
Comment from Belinda
Oh wow, the final verse gets me carried away. It is so beautiful. Not to mention the whole poem, which tells the wonderful story of a bruised soul finding love once again. Bravo, Bob!
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Oh wow, the final verse gets me carried away. It is so beautiful. Not to mention the whole poem, which tells the wonderful story of a bruised soul finding love once again. Bravo, Bob!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Wow! Thanks so much, Belinda. I appreciate your comments so much. Happy Holidays...Bob
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
"Precise, yet vague,
such chameleon paths were traveled." no truer words have ever been penned to reflect the idiosyncratic life of the human soul. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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"Precise, yet vague,
such chameleon paths were traveled." no truer words have ever been penned to reflect the idiosyncratic life of the human soul. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much, Paula. Blessings and Happy Holidays...Bob
Comment from axelbeariter
God's plan hurled me onward
to discover your world in mine
at the brink of my fading sunset./That's the way it's happened to many of us, including me. After four failed marriages, I realized love wasn't the impetus for being in any of them. You've reminded me of that, and made me feel grateful for the one who is now caressing my bruised soul at 75. Better late than never. In my opinion, this is one of your greatest works. It definitely connects the dots of frustration in love.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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God's plan hurled me onward
to discover your world in mine
at the brink of my fading sunset./That's the way it's happened to many of us, including me. After four failed marriages, I realized love wasn't the impetus for being in any of them. You've reminded me of that, and made me feel grateful for the one who is now caressing my bruised soul at 75. Better late than never. In my opinion, this is one of your greatest works. It definitely connects the dots of frustration in love.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much,Axel for the six stars and the great comments. Very encouraging tosay the least. Happy Holidays. Bob
