The Artist Of The Isles
Madness of an artist27 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Susan, this is a beautiful story with such wonderful imagery. I felt like I was by the sea reading it. Very enjoyable. Hope you are well. Take care!!! Hugs,Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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Susan, this is a beautiful story with such wonderful imagery. I felt like I was by the sea reading it. Very enjoyable. Hope you are well. Take care!!! Hugs,Debbie
Comment Written 30-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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Hi Deb! Thank you!! I have been better, more pain and scary times ahead. But, trying to keep going! I am thrilled that you liked this too! Love, Susan
Comment from Judian James
Ooooh, a very moody piece. I thought this was very well written, especially for such a short write. excellent!
While I think of it Susan, have you seen the documentary film by Robert Redford called "Buck"? A must see for a horse lover!!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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Ooooh, a very moody piece. I thought this was very well written, especially for such a short write. excellent!
While I think of it Susan, have you seen the documentary film by Robert Redford called "Buck"? A must see for a horse lover!!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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Hi Jude! Wow, Thank you! Your thoughts are special to me and when you approve it's so neat!! AND I will see if I can watch this too? I've not seen this yet! I love RR! And you. Suse
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It's out on DVD. Just simply "Buck". Fabulous!!! Let me know.
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Oh okay! I'll search the Pay Per views? Then if it's not there, rent it! Thanks!! ")) I will pm when I see it! S.
Comment from missy98writer
Susan,
Your story is very well written for flash fiction. In a minimum amount of words for a maximum effect you managed to establish characters, setting, a story line, conflict and resolution. Your narrative is very good in your story. Your descriptive writing is great in your flash fiction tale. I immensely enjoyed your flash fiction tale. I'd recommend you horror and flash fiction story to other readers. The art work is wicked cool. Please have a fabulous day.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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Susan,
Your story is very well written for flash fiction. In a minimum amount of words for a maximum effect you managed to establish characters, setting, a story line, conflict and resolution. Your narrative is very good in your story. Your descriptive writing is great in your flash fiction tale. I immensely enjoyed your flash fiction tale. I'd recommend you horror and flash fiction story to other readers. The art work is wicked cool. Please have a fabulous day.
Melissa.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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Hi Melissa! HUGS! You are the best fan. Always so enthusiastic and kind...you keep me at it. I hope you have a great day too! Stay safe and warm!! Love, suse
Comment from JW
Interesting. I have learned something new today thanks to your short story. I had never heard of a kelpie before.
Your story is quite dramatic. Good job. JW
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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Interesting. I have learned something new today thanks to your short story. I had never heard of a kelpie before.
Your story is quite dramatic. Good job. JW
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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HI Jonathon!! Thank you! This was a fun thing to write...I always like these odd little legends! Thank you again!! Susan
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A lovely little script about a sea horse. The story is wall described and written well. The imagery and the script has been structured and displayed and easy for the reader to read
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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A lovely little script about a sea horse. The story is wall described and written well. The imagery and the script has been structured and displayed and easy for the reader to read
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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Thank you Mary!! I'm very pleased you enjoyed!! A fun story to do. I love the old folklore. xoxo, susan
Comment from livingwords
Very well done. Excellent descriptive prose that keeps us wondering where you are going with this. Then you surprise with heartache and hope. Really enjoyed. Dan :))
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Very well done. Excellent descriptive prose that keeps us wondering where you are going with this. Then you surprise with heartache and hope. Really enjoyed. Dan :))
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Hi Dan! How are you? I hope you are happy and well...unlike me, the tortured nitwit! lol! I thank you for this kind and most welcome review. It's a thrill each time you approve! HUG, Susan
Comment from Bellringer
Susan, your story is both a haunting and fascinating journey into the tortured mind of an artist. There are numerous poetic lines and imagery in this one. The ending is quite chilling. I know the word "drug" is a regional dialect (Southern/Midwestern), but "dragged" is probably clearer. Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Susan, your story is both a haunting and fascinating journey into the tortured mind of an artist. There are numerous poetic lines and imagery in this one. The ending is quite chilling. I know the word "drug" is a regional dialect (Southern/Midwestern), but "dragged" is probably clearer. Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Hi Hector~ thank you! I trust your judgement and changed it to dragged! I wasn't sure...so, again, thanks for your help! Hugs...susan
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You're welcome, my friend. Have a blessed day. Regards, Hector
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:] S.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I found this rather
haunting and eerie,
Susan... quite
different to your
usual pieces.
water(')s edge
Margaret
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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I found this rather
haunting and eerie,
Susan... quite
different to your
usual pieces.
water(')s edge
Margaret
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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HI Margaret...please forgive me this late reply again? I do appreciate all your reviews and time for me...so much. Still feeling terrible and going to doc again tomorrow/ heck, today. NOT fun...I hope you are doing good, please take care!! HUG! Susan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this very short story.
The voice is loud now. (I wonder if the the 'now' should be at the beginning of the sentence for a more dramatic effect. Now, the voice is loud.)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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I enjoyed reading this very short story.
The voice is loud now. (I wonder if the the 'now' should be at the beginning of the sentence for a more dramatic effect. Now, the voice is loud.)
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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HI Barbara! I will check this tomorrow? Contest is over, so it's okay? Thank you for the help. Just so you enjoyed! And I hope you are feeling good too Barb. Please take care! HUG, susan
Comment from RKagan
Wow, did you draw this? It is magnificent. You are not only a talented writer, but an awesome artist as well. The depth behind the drawing is apparant in both the story and the picture. great job.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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Wow, did you draw this? It is magnificent. You are not only a talented writer, but an awesome artist as well. The depth behind the drawing is apparant in both the story and the picture. great job.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2011
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HI Roberta! No, but thank you! For thinking I did draw this odd picture! I do draw horses tho! Someday if I ever feel better I am going to put some more art on FA. If you like, check out my two there now? A painting and a drawing? I have the same name there. I am thrilled with your kind enthusiasm! Many hugs young lady! Susan
