Little Me
The power of one's conscience6 total reviews
Comment from Crystal Carey
Truthfully I don't really understand what you are saying here. Although I am sure if it were in a longer form your point would be much more clear!!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Truthfully I don't really understand what you are saying here. Although I am sure if it were in a longer form your point would be much more clear!!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Well Carey,thanks for being truthful..the whole point of my author's review was to throw more light to the poem
Comment from Frankeddy
Very good 5-7-5 poem, proper syllable count.
Well thought out and well written.
Good message within the poem and author's notes provided.
Presented in a clear bright setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Very good 5-7-5 poem, proper syllable count.
Well thought out and well written.
Good message within the poem and author's notes provided.
Presented in a clear bright setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Thanks a lot Frank...
Comment from wesleten000
I really liked your haiku. I only gave you a four on account of the fact that I believe that you could have done more with this poem, in the sense of writing more. I liked that it was so realistic and true. The only thing that I didn't like about it was what I mentioned before. I think that if you keep writing in the way that you are, you may end up being a pretty famous and well-respected author. :) keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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I really liked your haiku. I only gave you a four on account of the fact that I believe that you could have done more with this poem, in the sense of writing more. I liked that it was so realistic and true. The only thing that I didn't like about it was what I mentioned before. I think that if you keep writing in the way that you are, you may end up being a pretty famous and well-respected author. :) keep up the good work!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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Thanks alot. I have noted your observations duly.
Comment from oozer
Makes one think about growing things. We love growing things. We worry if our plants get diseased. We want people to admire our flowers, our pets, our lawns. Nurturing things brings us much pleasure and fulfillment.
Impressive Haiku.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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Makes one think about growing things. We love growing things. We worry if our plants get diseased. We want people to admire our flowers, our pets, our lawns. Nurturing things brings us much pleasure and fulfillment.
Impressive Haiku.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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Thank you so much
Comment from manjuneelam
Nicely written poem. It has a lot meaning in very few words. Very true you can only have growth when you truly look the side of you, which is the more tough side which accommodate negatively and till you recognize that you do not grow. That is the meaning I get this from poen.Good luck in the poetry contest.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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Nicely written poem. It has a lot meaning in very few words. Very true you can only have growth when you truly look the side of you, which is the more tough side which accommodate negatively and till you recognize that you do not grow. That is the meaning I get this from poen.Good luck in the poetry contest.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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Thanks alot
Comment from Van
That's a damn fine 5,7,5. Of course if you hadn't explained it, I would have said it was just a good syllable count. Thanks for that bit of author's insight. Some of the avid Haiku professionals would advocate not giving hints to the meaning of these short works. But for the amateur like myself...I wouldn't make heads nor tails of most of them without a little help.
Excellent submission.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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That's a damn fine 5,7,5. Of course if you hadn't explained it, I would have said it was just a good syllable count. Thanks for that bit of author's insight. Some of the avid Haiku professionals would advocate not giving hints to the meaning of these short works. But for the amateur like myself...I wouldn't make heads nor tails of most of them without a little help.
Excellent submission.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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Thank you so much.
