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Case Studies of Hauntings

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Comment from AprilShower
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This is a spooky. It seems like some strange things are happening. They are looking for ghosts. It seems they have found one, which leaves her mark on of the women. It looks like the women are about to leave. Interesting.

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 Comment Written 23-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2011
    Thanks so much, AprilShower. I appreciate your insight and generous review. Kindest regards, Bev
reply by AprilShower on 24-Nov-2011
    Looks like I was thinking faster than I could type and left out some words. You're welcome Bev.

    April
Comment from Yvon
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I never read aqny of the previous material for this story but i found this section exciting. It had a flow that kept me reading.
Good work
Yvon

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 Comment Written 23-Nov-2011


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2011
    Thanks so much for your great review, Yvon. I appreciate you stopping by! Kind regards, Bev