Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Part two, Chapter 13"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from oNray
This story has a number interpretations,as to the blind leading the blind (people with troubles of there own trying to help others) . Seldom does that work
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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This story has a number interpretations,as to the blind leading the blind (people with troubles of there own trying to help others) . Seldom does that work
Comment Written 22-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Heart wrenching read as always.
Anna's realization that nothing she could have done differently would have mattered was poignant.
The interaction between her and Troy feels real, and I am grateful she has him to support her.
Another gripping chapter,
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Heart wrenching read as always.
Anna's realization that nothing she could have done differently would have mattered was poignant.
The interaction between her and Troy feels real, and I am grateful she has him to support her.
Another gripping chapter,
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I am so glad you brought up support groups. I belong to a mental health support group and it has been so helpful in dealing with what life brings. Have a great Thanksgiving!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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I am so glad you brought up support groups. I belong to a mental health support group and it has been so helpful in dealing with what life brings. Have a great Thanksgiving!!! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I feel Anna won't get emotional healthy if she doesn't get help and I need to get her and Troy tgether, so I need her healthy.
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Definitely, I'm routing for them!!! Debbie
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
A good chapter; the careful way Troy responds to her gives assurance that Anna is accepted. I do hope you and yours have a wonderful week. Happy Thanksgiving. I'm go to Maine the day after. Hope I don't break a metatarsal this time.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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A good chapter; the careful way Troy responds to her gives assurance that Anna is accepted. I do hope you and yours have a wonderful week. Happy Thanksgiving. I'm go to Maine the day after. Hope I don't break a metatarsal this time.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I wish you the best in Maine.
Comment from cathmine
Barbara, this is the first chapter I've had the pleasure of reading. The crisp dialog makes me want to delve further into Anna's past and what Troy's demons might have been.
Very interesting.
Cathmine
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Barbara, this is the first chapter I've had the pleasure of reading. The crisp dialog makes me want to delve further into Anna's past and what Troy's demons might have been.
Very interesting.
Cathmine
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
This is another good chapter. It is wonderful that you can express the feelings that go through the people involved in the story. I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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This is another good chapter. It is wonderful that you can express the feelings that go through the people involved in the story. I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Daylok
Great chapter, Great dialogue, totally held me interest!! The awareness... is amazing as well!!! The after math of this abuse is for life!! Well Done. Cheers to your courage!!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Great chapter, Great dialogue, totally held me interest!! The awareness... is amazing as well!!! The after math of this abuse is for life!! Well Done. Cheers to your courage!!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from ScarletClearwater
Lovely job here. I always seemed to catch them in the courtroom, so it was nice to see them outside of it. Great dialogue between the two. There was a nice tension between them. I wanted them to kiss. Ha ha, so I really like the emotion and the breakthru she has.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Lovely job here. I always seemed to catch them in the courtroom, so it was nice to see them outside of it. Great dialogue between the two. There was a nice tension between them. I wanted them to kiss. Ha ha, so I really like the emotion and the breakthru she has.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Definitely was a blessing for Anna found with Troy, he has been a great help for she in all aspects. I loved this chapter Barbara, congratulations!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Definitely was a blessing for Anna found with Troy, he has been a great help for she in all aspects. I loved this chapter Barbara, congratulations!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TammyGail
Another stunning chapter Barbara
This was well written like always
Compelling dialog indeed
Thanks for the note as well I hope Thanksgiving goes well sweetie .. Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Another stunning chapter Barbara
This was well written like always
Compelling dialog indeed
Thanks for the note as well I hope Thanksgiving goes well sweetie .. Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
