Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Karen Stram
This is a beautifully told tale of a woman's epiphany about spousal abuse. The story is told with sensitivity. It has tension and moves well. The characters are strong and the dialogue is natural.
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This is a beautifully told tale of a woman's epiphany about spousal abuse. The story is told with sensitivity. It has tension and moves well. The characters are strong and the dialogue is natural.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written an should help many who read it. Thank you for your Author's Notes. I trust you will have a successful Thanksgiving.
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This is very well written an should help many who read it. Thank you for your Author's Notes. I trust you will have a successful Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Barbara, this synopsis of a support group meeting's importance is flawlessly written, and sensitively presented. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. :) Nancy
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Barbara, this synopsis of a support group meeting's importance is flawlessly written, and sensitively presented. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. :) Nancy
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jadapenn
A short crisp chapter. I just felt Troy was taking a decision on Anna's behalf here by taking her to this meeting. The poor woman is in a real state with all the goings on. Nicely penned. luv jada
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A short crisp chapter. I just felt Troy was taking a decision on Anna's behalf here by taking her to this meeting. The poor woman is in a real state with all the goings on. Nicely penned. luv jada
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I love this chapter and how loving and caring Troy was to Anna. When she didn't come out of the building with the other women I was afraid Bobby had escaped and went after her. I was relieved that he didn't. I know you will have a wonderful Thanksgiving with your family. Well done. Blessings, chey
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Hi Barbara,
I love this chapter and how loving and caring Troy was to Anna. When she didn't come out of the building with the other women I was afraid Bobby had escaped and went after her. I was relieved that he didn't. I know you will have a wonderful Thanksgiving with your family. Well done. Blessings, chey
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amada
This is a very good chapter. Lovely to read the progression of the story and things going into place. I like Troy's character, specially his light sense of humor.
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This is a very good chapter. Lovely to read the progression of the story and things going into place. I like Troy's character, specially his light sense of humor.
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from peggles
I love the way the story is progressing and Anna is beginning to trust Troy
You have unlocked a door so many keep firmly closed with your interesting story that women need to read and understand
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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I love the way the story is progressing and Anna is beginning to trust Troy
You have unlocked a door so many keep firmly closed with your interesting story that women need to read and understand
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
He is such a great guy Barbara. What a difference a sound raising can make. I love that Anna's baby will not be raised by the lunatic family of the father.A very good chapter.
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He is such a great guy Barbara. What a difference a sound raising can make. I love that Anna's baby will not be raised by the lunatic family of the father.A very good chapter.
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from alexisleech
Congratulations on, not only writing this excellent part chapter, but imparting your message, which is also explained so well in your author's notes. If just one woman who is being abused reads this and draws strength from it, you a achieved something wonderful. Well done!
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Congratulations on, not only writing this excellent part chapter, but imparting your message, which is also explained so well in your author's notes. If just one woman who is being abused reads this and draws strength from it, you a achieved something wonderful. Well done!
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robina1978
Will miss you my friend, but hope you will have a lovely time with your family. This chapter is good. With some hesitation Anna joins the group and the first thing that really gets through to her is that all the abuse was not her fault. Must be good that the emotions come straight away.
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Will miss you my friend, but hope you will have a lovely time with your family. This chapter is good. With some hesitation Anna joins the group and the first thing that really gets through to her is that all the abuse was not her fault. Must be good that the emotions come straight away.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
