The Moving Wind
poem a bout a suffering people in a country4 total reviews
Comment from ernesto escarro
The Moving Wind
It is a nice form of writing.
A courage to go, hope for surmounting
tempest, while life is exposed in the dark.
A great sigh to hear.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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The Moving Wind
It is a nice form of writing.
A courage to go, hope for surmounting
tempest, while life is exposed in the dark.
A great sigh to hear.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2011
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Thank you i really appreciate your rating.Good day
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thank you for your comment.
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Thanks for sharing. God bless.
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thank and God bless you too.
Comment from b.anderson65
The words are moving. THe wind is there and so is the pain. The originality of your poem sends your voice to the readers, and this will make them feel. Continue to develop your voice and what you say will be recognized as you.
I love the flow and pace of your poem. I like the way you instilled the suffering of your people through this poem.
The moving wind goes every where and here the voice of your people.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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The words are moving. THe wind is there and so is the pain. The originality of your poem sends your voice to the readers, and this will make them feel. Continue to develop your voice and what you say will be recognized as you.
I love the flow and pace of your poem. I like the way you instilled the suffering of your people through this poem.
The moving wind goes every where and here the voice of your people.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2011
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I really appreciate your comment thank you
Comment from rniranjan5
Very moving heartfelt emotion which gets transmitted efficiently to the reader. Very well written and one's heart goes out to all the oppressed. "The end of this will come" is a nice touch, and it's like a universally true statement like "and, this also shall pass". Nice ending, the poem has the ability to show the glimmer of hope to people who don't have anything to look upto. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Very moving heartfelt emotion which gets transmitted efficiently to the reader. Very well written and one's heart goes out to all the oppressed. "The end of this will come" is a nice touch, and it's like a universally true statement like "and, this also shall pass". Nice ending, the poem has the ability to show the glimmer of hope to people who don't have anything to look upto. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Thank you very much and i really appreciate your comment good day.
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I really appreciate your reviews
Comment from Earl of Oxford
I cannot ee the connection of your poem to the contest rules which require just THREE lines with a syllable count of 5-7-5
Earl
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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I cannot ee the connection of your poem to the contest rules which require just THREE lines with a syllable count of 5-7-5
Earl
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Thank you for reviewing my work but i thought i could also write the end part of my poem by including the fourth line.
