Changing Rooms
The Sequel to 'Room Beside My Heart'26 total reviews
Comment from Lainee...
Hi Grant,
How cool to pop in and read something of yours straight up! Great flow and rhyming throughout and still brings a smile to this readers face every time.
Lainee
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2011
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Hi Grant,
How cool to pop in and read something of yours straight up! Great flow and rhyming throughout and still brings a smile to this readers face every time.
Lainee
Comment Written 19-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2011
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Hi hon!
How the devil are you? Glad you liked it and hope I can continue to keep that smile on your dial! lol
cheers
Grant
Comment from cathmine
mrgrunty, The tempo of this poem is delightful. I needed to read it three times before I realized that it was not a melancholy poem, but one of a great love that was bursting to be free. Did I catch it?
Hidden meanings...nice.
Cathmine
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2011
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mrgrunty, The tempo of this poem is delightful. I needed to read it three times before I realized that it was not a melancholy poem, but one of a great love that was bursting to be free. Did I catch it?
Hidden meanings...nice.
Cathmine
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2011
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Hi there Cathmine,
yep that's about right, you got it!
Thanks for the great review, I appreciate it!
cheers
Grant
Comment from Satine Dreaming
What a beautiful moving poem with such a fitting metaphor for "unlocking" one's heart to love.
Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking poem and best wishes!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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What a beautiful moving poem with such a fitting metaphor for "unlocking" one's heart to love.
Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking poem and best wishes!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Hi Satine,
thankyou for the great comments, I really appreciate it.
cheers
Grant
Comment from Tonulak
This poem was gentle and bittersweet with a wonderful wistful quality. I particularly liked the lines, "...and darkness dreamed of colors more than black". This was a very nice write.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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This poem was gentle and bittersweet with a wonderful wistful quality. I particularly liked the lines, "...and darkness dreamed of colors more than black". This was a very nice write.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Hi Tonulak,
I appreciate the great review. Thankyou very much.
cheers
Grant
Comment from ameen786
mrgrunty, my friend, you should change your penname to something like mrpoetry; your beautiful verse certainly does not match your penname, outstanding ditty with lovely verses and excellent rhyming and that heart-landing at the end is dynamite.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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mrgrunty, my friend, you should change your penname to something like mrpoetry; your beautiful verse certainly does not match your penname, outstanding ditty with lovely verses and excellent rhyming and that heart-landing at the end is dynamite.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thankyou Ameen,
I really do appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work.
cheers
Grant
Comment from womanwriter
WOW!!! I was very impressed to see such a beautifully written love poem from such a young man! I am a sucker for love stories, and this one is one of the ones that got me good!
I totally enjoyed the read and the writing was superb!
Thank for sharing.
Blessings & Hugs,
womanwriter
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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WOW!!! I was very impressed to see such a beautifully written love poem from such a young man! I am a sucker for love stories, and this one is one of the ones that got me good!
I totally enjoyed the read and the writing was superb!
Thank for sharing.
Blessings & Hugs,
womanwriter
Comment Written 17-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Hi there womanwriter,
Thanks for dropping by and leaving such head swelling comments!!
I appreciate it.
cheers
Grant
Comment from rhymelord
Dear mrgrunty,
Excellent use of iambic metre with good rhyme and an interesting content make this a pleasure to read.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Dear mrgrunty,
Excellent use of iambic metre with good rhyme and an interesting content make this a pleasure to read.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 17-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Hi Reg,
Thanks for the kind words mate, I really appreciate it as you obviously know your stuff.
If it interests you, a lot of my stuff is rhymed (although I like to tinker with formats)
Again Reg, thanks.
cheers
Grant
Comment from Kingsland
This poem has a very good rhythm to its thoughts and phrases. I also like the way you chose to format it. It has good emotion and imagery as well. This was just a delight to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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This poem has a very good rhythm to its thoughts and phrases. I also like the way you chose to format it. It has good emotion and imagery as well. This was just a delight to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Hi John,
great to see you again mate.
Thanks for dropping by and I hope you are well.
cheers
grant
Comment from atty.may
I'm so glad I found your beautiful poem. I really appreciate it; it flowed and rhymed so smoothly and effortlessly, i truly felt your longing. Looking forward to reading part 1. Yours, May
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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I'm so glad I found your beautiful poem. I really appreciate it; it flowed and rhymed so smoothly and effortlessly, i truly felt your longing. Looking forward to reading part 1. Yours, May
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Hello May,
I am glad you enjoyed it and thankful you took the time to comment.
cheers
Grant
Comment from L K Pinaire
As usual, you work is near perfect. I loved it. Sorry it took me so long to get to it. I hope you're doing well.
Good writing,
Larry
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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As usual, you work is near perfect. I loved it. Sorry it took me so long to get to it. I hope you're doing well.
Good writing,
Larry
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Hi mate,
I knew you'd be along at some point!
I am doing great...new muse and life is good!!!!
Hope you also are doing well my good man.
cheers to you and thankyou for your constant support!
Grant
