Cry for my Beloved wife
Divorce tears into shreds our humaness.70 total reviews
Comment from ScarletClearwater
I like the style of this poem. It keeps the emotion high and it's easy to read. Great job with this portrayal of a divorce and its aftermath. Sad, but enlightening read.
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I like the style of this poem. It keeps the emotion high and it's easy to read. Great job with this portrayal of a divorce and its aftermath. Sad, but enlightening read.
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Wow,i like your kind words
Comment from Dougspoetry
Divorce is a horrible thing. No doubt the children pay the highest price of all. Nicely structured and clearly conveyed. Great work!
God Bless!
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Divorce is a horrible thing. No doubt the children pay the highest price of all. Nicely structured and clearly conveyed. Great work!
God Bless!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
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I agree with your view.It is so true.
Comment from l.raven
It's always sad when it comes down to a divore. The kids feel thwe worst of it. Your poem is well written, but yet so very sad.
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It's always sad when it comes down to a divore. The kids feel thwe worst of it. Your poem is well written, but yet so very sad.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
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I believe it is sad because i ended up sad after i lost the war
Comment from Krugerrand
Your poem expresses clearly a wide range of emotions. None of stronger, though, than the anguish. It's always unfortunate when families break up, but even more so when all parties are not in agreement.
Thank you for sharing.
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Your poem expresses clearly a wide range of emotions. None of stronger, though, than the anguish. It's always unfortunate when families break up, but even more so when all parties are not in agreement.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
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Thanks to you
Comment from amada
This is a sad work and i can agree that the effects of a divorce are devastating. Very good work expressing your feelings. Best wishes.
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This is a sad work and i can agree that the effects of a divorce are devastating. Very good work expressing your feelings. Best wishes.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
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You did me proud by your thoughtful comment
Comment from Janie King
So very true..children are badly affected besides each of the adults involved. Some say it's worse than death because there is never any real closure. Much to think about. God bless.
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So very true..children are badly affected besides each of the adults involved. Some say it's worse than death because there is never any real closure. Much to think about. God bless.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
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Thanks so much
Comment from randomzed
Your author's notes were unnecessary.
I got the point.
I tip my hat to you for expressing all this in 5-7-5.
Artful.
I have not understood if your the husband, or the child of the marriage.
Whatever, well done and full marks.
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Your author's notes were unnecessary.
I got the point.
I tip my hat to you for expressing all this in 5-7-5.
Artful.
I have not understood if your the husband, or the child of the marriage.
Whatever, well done and full marks.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
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I think i say in the poem..this my wife and kids
Comment from Fluffyhead
Seriously don't feel bad about the divorce. Great Poem Its bad when parents stay together and spew vitriol at each other too.. My aunt left her husband after years of him cheating and the kids were upset but they got past it and things were better. I also have a friend whose parents were and still are drunks who beat other up. He has a lot of emotional problems because of it.
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Seriously don't feel bad about the divorce. Great Poem Its bad when parents stay together and spew vitriol at each other too.. My aunt left her husband after years of him cheating and the kids were upset but they got past it and things were better. I also have a friend whose parents were and still are drunks who beat other up. He has a lot of emotional problems because of it.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
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I agree the effects of divorce are devastating.thanks for your comment
Comment from skye
Unique story poem using the 5-7-5 format to tell the tragic tale of divorce, pain, and loss.
Yes, much thought should be given before leaving the marriage. Both sides should really try to communicate, mend the problems, and heal the hurts. Both sides are generally at fault.
Very very well done.
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Unique story poem using the 5-7-5 format to tell the tragic tale of divorce, pain, and loss.
Yes, much thought should be given before leaving the marriage. Both sides should really try to communicate, mend the problems, and heal the hurts. Both sides are generally at fault.
Very very well done.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
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Thanks to you
Comment from Gungalo
So right you are. Parents make their children miserable when they play the divorce game. No one is the winner and the children especially are the losers.
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So right you are. Parents make their children miserable when they play the divorce game. No one is the winner and the children especially are the losers.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2011
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I agree ..well thanks
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My pleasure.
