Cry for my Beloved wife
Divorce tears into shreds our humaness.70 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
going through a divorce is one of the hardest thing to go through. we should realy think about it very hard before we decided to that well written!!!
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going through a divorce is one of the hardest thing to go through. we should realy think about it very hard before we decided to that well written!!!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2011
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thanks all the same
Comment from cercie
I can only count the ways that I am grateful to not have to go through that pain. I have been married 47 almost 48 years and I could not imagine the pain
cercie
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I can only count the ways that I am grateful to not have to go through that pain. I have been married 47 almost 48 years and I could not imagine the pain
cercie
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2011
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You are blessed to be married to one person that long.Be blessed.
Comment from yndemand
This poem I really could relate to the words that were written and I tell you even if it turns to hate it tears your inner soul to little bitty tiny peices, Thank you for sharing Syllable count good well written
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This poem I really could relate to the words that were written and I tell you even if it turns to hate it tears your inner soul to little bitty tiny peices, Thank you for sharing Syllable count good well written
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2011
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Thank you for taking time to give such brilliant thoughts.
Comment from robina1978
Great series of 5-7-5's. Loved the purple background as it is a colour of grief. You wrote about the process of divorce so well here and full of emotion. Can totally agree with your footnote.
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Great series of 5-7-5's. Loved the purple background as it is a colour of grief. You wrote about the process of divorce so well here and full of emotion. Can totally agree with your footnote.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2011
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I am so thankful to you
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most welcome and deserved my friend, Ine
Comment from whitedesert
This poem has depth and purpose. It accurately protray the agony of divorce, the damage it does to kids, permanently. The flow has a sense of rawness to it that shows that the words came from deep within the poet, and gives this poem the kind of legitimacy that is hard to find in many well designed and perfect literate poems.
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This poem has depth and purpose. It accurately protray the agony of divorce, the damage it does to kids, permanently. The flow has a sense of rawness to it that shows that the words came from deep within the poet, and gives this poem the kind of legitimacy that is hard to find in many well designed and perfect literate poems.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2011
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Thanks for that kind of sentiment.It rings so true to my heart.
Comment from oozer
t'was one fine... should be: 'twas one fine...
'I'm seeking my dear none to hold;
I'm seeking my dear one to hold
only minor flaws! Good luck!
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t'was one fine... should be: 'twas one fine...
'I'm seeking my dear none to hold;
I'm seeking my dear one to hold
only minor flaws! Good luck!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2011
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I will fix that and see how it goes.It is quite helpful you spotted that .thanks
Comment from The Stranger
I echo your words, parents should fight and work together in keeping a healthy marriage together, I am sorry for your sad experience in this matter
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I echo your words, parents should fight and work together in keeping a healthy marriage together, I am sorry for your sad experience in this matter
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2011
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Appreciate your kind remarks
Comment from Allison78
I think this is a great poem you have written here! So very sad but very beautifully written and honest, you are very brave to write about such a dard topic.
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I think this is a great poem you have written here! So very sad but very beautifully written and honest, you are very brave to write about such a dard topic.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2011
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I think it is because i suffered much in that situation.T hanks
Comment from Ekim777
Separation from a former loved one indeed demands a period of mourning. It is akin to a death and the first reaction is must I go through this? You should know that the shadow of suffering is always in the wings even as you rest in times of contentment. Suffering and pleasure are surely two sides of the same coin. Detachment of earthly things, including in relationships is an ideal state maybe unattainable. After the loss there is the emptiness and all we do is search for escapes, denial and dreams of the past all of which are aggravations of the spirit because whatever has past is dead. THat should include memories. Memories become illusions. But to accept this is to pave the way into the future. Remember life and relationships are not static. THey are in a constant state of flux and movement. In as short a time as possible forget your memories, renounce your sense of guilt and remorse and one day you will realize that now is the first day of the rest of your life. You have one more thing to learn; the need to gain a certain detachment. All I have said lies buried in the words of your poem. Good luck. - EKim
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Separation from a former loved one indeed demands a period of mourning. It is akin to a death and the first reaction is must I go through this? You should know that the shadow of suffering is always in the wings even as you rest in times of contentment. Suffering and pleasure are surely two sides of the same coin. Detachment of earthly things, including in relationships is an ideal state maybe unattainable. After the loss there is the emptiness and all we do is search for escapes, denial and dreams of the past all of which are aggravations of the spirit because whatever has past is dead. THat should include memories. Memories become illusions. But to accept this is to pave the way into the future. Remember life and relationships are not static. THey are in a constant state of flux and movement. In as short a time as possible forget your memories, renounce your sense of guilt and remorse and one day you will realize that now is the first day of the rest of your life. You have one more thing to learn; the need to gain a certain detachment. All I have said lies buried in the words of your poem. Good luck. - EKim
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2011
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I agree with you pal.Thanks for your honest comment and thoughtful advice.
Comment from rjuselius
i'm sorry to hear about your messy divorce.
it's always harder for one of them. does this amount
to the amount of love each held dear?
well-written. was this biographical?
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i'm sorry to hear about your messy divorce.
it's always harder for one of them. does this amount
to the amount of love each held dear?
well-written. was this biographical?
Comment Written 11-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2011
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It was.It was.I went through it all.Butt i have since moved on
