Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
I am very pleased with the outcome of this Chapter. As I noted in previous reviews, I felt that the attempt to prove that Anna failed to protect Michal would backfire for two reasons:
1. Troy's medical record was likely obtained by illegal means. This becomes a moot point when it is shown that Troy's Hepatitis B can not be transfered to Michael and in addition Anna had included Hepatitis B in his vaccinations.
Mr. Brow sleazy trick always seemed like he was inept an grasping at straws.
2. I was certain that the attempted abduction of Michael had to be arranged by Mrs. Rodgers. Nobody else had a motive to take him from a respected Day Care Center. by placing Michael there Anna showed th she was interested in her child's safety
I have noticed that throughout your book, you show Anna's fears left over from her unfortunate marriage. Even now that the trial is over, Anna fears what will happen when Bobby is released from jail.
I am anxious to see how her fears are resolved.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Hi Barbara:)
I am very pleased with the outcome of this Chapter. As I noted in previous reviews, I felt that the attempt to prove that Anna failed to protect Michal would backfire for two reasons:
1. Troy's medical record was likely obtained by illegal means. This becomes a moot point when it is shown that Troy's Hepatitis B can not be transfered to Michael and in addition Anna had included Hepatitis B in his vaccinations.
Mr. Brow sleazy trick always seemed like he was inept an grasping at straws.
2. I was certain that the attempted abduction of Michael had to be arranged by Mrs. Rodgers. Nobody else had a motive to take him from a respected Day Care Center. by placing Michael there Anna showed th she was interested in her child's safety
I have noticed that throughout your book, you show Anna's fears left over from her unfortunate marriage. Even now that the trial is over, Anna fears what will happen when Bobby is released from jail.
I am anxious to see how her fears are resolved.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I am working on resolving those fears. I have to or Anna and Troy can't be together or at least should not be together.
Comment from jadapenn
The courtroom saga continues. This must have cost you quite a bit of research. My only time in court was when I got divorced so I'm rather court-shy. Poor old Troy will have to work hard to woe this woman. Wrong time for her at the moment with all the action going on. luv jada
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The courtroom saga continues. This must have cost you quite a bit of research. My only time in court was when I got divorced so I'm rather court-shy. Poor old Troy will have to work hard to woe this woman. Wrong time for her at the moment with all the action going on. luv jada
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I have a friend who is an attorney who lends me suggestions.
Comment from Chris Tee
Barbara this is another excellent part and the plot is now thickening nicely. Well done with this rather splendid write here it was indeed pleasant to read ma'am.
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Barbara this is another excellent part and the plot is now thickening nicely. Well done with this rather splendid write here it was indeed pleasant to read ma'am.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gypsynet
a solid write that ends with closure that has s redeeming value...good use if imagery specifically during the court scene.. pacing from climactic mode to something gracious toward the end is noted.. more than a creative piece, this likewise has an important social message.. fine write!
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a solid write that ends with closure that has s redeeming value...good use if imagery specifically during the court scene.. pacing from climactic mode to something gracious toward the end is noted.. more than a creative piece, this likewise has an important social message.. fine write!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from honeytree
The art work is great
I felt this was very good story
It is true the truth is obtained in most cases.
One piece of evidence can change the outcome.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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The art work is great
I felt this was very good story
It is true the truth is obtained in most cases.
One piece of evidence can change the outcome.
Honey tree
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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I enjoyed reading your writing.
Honeytree
Comment from allborn66
This is a very interesting chapter. I liked the drama that it had. It seemed realistic. I like the character portrayals. It has a nice flow.
Barbara
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This is a very interesting chapter. I liked the drama that it had. It seemed realistic. I like the character portrayals. It has a nice flow.
Barbara
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
This is great chapter. I was relieved when Anna won her case. But when she said Bobby would be angry about that and also because his mother is in jail, it gave me pause. Bobby can't be trusted not to do something to harm Anna and even Michael for that matter. Anna knows he will want revenge and that is very scary. You are not rushing to post too fast at all. I love every chapter. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Hi Barbara,
This is great chapter. I was relieved when Anna won her case. But when she said Bobby would be angry about that and also because his mother is in jail, it gave me pause. Bobby can't be trusted not to do something to harm Anna and even Michael for that matter. Anna knows he will want revenge and that is very scary. You are not rushing to post too fast at all. I love every chapter. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sweet Anita
Barbara... I think the authentic language in your court scenes are very believeable. I'm glad that the question of Troy giving Anna's son hepatis has been resolved.... Yikes... Barbara.... We just had anonther earthquake here. I didn't hear the one last night but this one shook our house and made a loud sound like thunder... It lasted for about 15 seconds. Scary!!! .... Sorry.. LOL I've never been in an earthquake before. I was about to say.. I enjoyed this chapter very much. I hope that Anna and Troy get together soon. Great job of writing.
Nita :-)
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Barbara... I think the authentic language in your court scenes are very believeable. I'm glad that the question of Troy giving Anna's son hepatis has been resolved.... Yikes... Barbara.... We just had anonther earthquake here. I didn't hear the one last night but this one shook our house and made a loud sound like thunder... It lasted for about 15 seconds. Scary!!! .... Sorry.. LOL I've never been in an earthquake before. I was about to say.. I enjoyed this chapter very much. I hope that Anna and Troy get together soon. Great job of writing.
Nita :-)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
I thought you were in Okalhoma. Maybe I am wrong, but you are having earthquakes. I will pray for you and other's safety.
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Thank you Barbara. We had an earthquake the day before at 2 in the morning and I was asleep and didn't know it happened, but this one was when I was writing a review for your story at 10:52 pm. The whole house shook, windows rattled and there was a loud roaring. It lasted several seconds and was really scary! That is the biggest earthquake in the history of Oklahoma.. a 5.6. I hope it is the last one. No damage was done, that I have heard of.. just cracks in plaster with the one the day before that was a 4.8. Thanks for your concern. I sure would hate to live on the west coast and have those all the time.
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I am glad you are safe. I sure don't understand what's happening around the world. Weird weather and such.
Comment from TammyGail
Another great chapter Barbara
This was very well written
Compelling as it should be
You kept my att throughout the read
Thanks for the background note
And author note it was a pleasure thanks for sharing
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Another great chapter Barbara
This was very well written
Compelling as it should be
You kept my att throughout the read
Thanks for the background note
And author note it was a pleasure thanks for sharing
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
the trial can very often seem more traumatic than the offence leading to it as skeletons invariably find themselves escaping from the cupboard
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the trial can very often seem more traumatic than the offence leading to it as skeletons invariably find themselves escaping from the cupboard
Comment Written 05-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
