Comment from HPicasso

Excellent

Hello again,
Very creative my friend and I enjoyed very much.
Tha is indeed a tragedy that will not ever be forgotten. You wrote it very well, in so few words!
You have written an excellent ABC poem, good imagery.
Congratulation!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Thanks so much, Picasso. I appreciate that very much. Bob

Comment from Herb

Excellent

Restless world
Surprise attack
Twins erupt and tumble
Unbelievable horror
Scene embedded forever.

You say a lot here in a small space. I think the first line starts it off well and the last line finishes it just as well.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Hey, thanks so much Herb. Bob

Comment from mslink1

Excellent

Your word choices are powerful and tell a story that all knows about.You did the picture justice,Bob.Take care, my friend and keep writing. Mary

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Mary???? Is that you????? Where in the hell have you been? LOL...I really did miss you! thanks so much for this...Don't be such a stranger. Bob

reply by mslink1 on 01-Nov-2011

yep--it's me alright...mslink1 hahaha. I miss you and 'a few other:).' LOL I'll try to get back more often--just to keep you on track lol. Love and hugs, Master of stories:) Mary

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011

What a gal! :) X0 Bob

reply by the author on 02-Nov-2011

Check you messages...Bob

Comment from Changeisgood

Excellent

Bob, Yes, it was restless. The time before the towers fell seems like another age. I hope you do (or did) well on the contest. A fine combination, a fine poem. Franny

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Hi, Franny. Coming from you I am elated. Thanks so much...Bob

Comment from Larrypic11

Excellent

You certainly captured the spirit of the event from the picture on down, Bob. "embedded" is the right word, for sure. Good luck in the contest. Larry

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Thanks so much, Larry. I do appreciate this...Bob

Comment from BigTomNY

Excellent

Amazing write here and absolutely strong powerful and needed message! May we all never forget the brutalish attack we received on 9/11!!!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Thanks so much, Tom. Bob

Comment from Ronni

Exceptional

Awesome presentation here Bob!Compelling, stuunning words
convey and image a national catastrophe and
irreprable heartache and memory.

Thanks for sharing, best of luck in contest!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Hi, Ronni. I have missed you! Thanks so much for the six stars and your fine comments. Bob

Comment from dbmccarter

Excellent

Very true. It is a scene that is etched in our memory and hearts forever. This should do very well in the contest. Great photo. Good luck.

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Thanks so much, Diane. Itruly appreciate your time. Bob

Comment from MelissaBickel

Excellent

Bob, your ABC poem pretty much sums up the whole of that time in our history. I know for myself I've never felt as numb, or hurt so bad. I was almost paralyzed for a week. This is a very compelling poem.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Thanks so much, Missy. Bob

Comment from JW

Excellent

This is a nice haiku which reminds of 9-11. No doubt, many lives were lost, and the U.S. lost it's arrogance in thinking it was invincible.

Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011

Yes, so true, Jonathon. Thanks so much...Bob