A Book of Songs
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Barbers Refrain (Part 2)"Metre ... Ballads & Slant Rhyme
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Comment from BigTomNY
Excellent writing and smooth flow with absolutely excellent structure and a release of vision as if it was actually candy for the brain!
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Excellent writing and smooth flow with absolutely excellent structure and a release of vision as if it was actually candy for the brain!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
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Excellent Big T...your always welcome.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, bicpen, a great job writing this part of your epic poem, i enjoyed reading the first part better than this, just more adventurous in the first part from what i remember. going on to the third one
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this is very well written, bicpen, a great job writing this part of your epic poem, i enjoyed reading the first part better than this, just more adventurous in the first part from what i remember. going on to the third one
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
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No worries it is supposed to be read as a complete poem but being divided takes away from it a bit...
Comment from Herb
Ok so I have read them in the wrong order. Don't think it really matters. I don't really get these poems or what you were trying to say, but the words were still a pleasure.
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Ok so I have read them in the wrong order. Don't think it really matters. I don't really get these poems or what you were trying to say, but the words were still a pleasure.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
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No worries herb...
Comment from fairy77
What can I say funny and good vocabulary.I loved the rhyme.Description excellent.A story poem almost.Boy you must really like barbers lol.Have a great weekend!beth faiy77
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What can I say funny and good vocabulary.I loved the rhyme.Description excellent.A story poem almost.Boy you must really like barbers lol.Have a great weekend!beth faiy77
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
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Many thanks fairy77...
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bicpen
I love the dialogue made me smile and just thinking men act as bad as some of us gals about how they desire to have their hair look
Thank you for your humor.
fun,fun
Gert
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Hello Bicpen
I love the dialogue made me smile and just thinking men act as bad as some of us gals about how they desire to have their hair look
Thank you for your humor.
fun,fun
Gert
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
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Excellent, many thanks Gert...
Comment from babylonia
made me smile and made me giggle. i like the way you keep the flow going in both parts and i presume in the third as well. easy to read and follow. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
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made me smile and made me giggle. i like the way you keep the flow going in both parts and i presume in the third as well. easy to read and follow. imagery is excellent.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
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Many thanks...
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you are very welcome~
Comment from volunteer angel
I'm enjoying these barber poems. I can imagine the different types of hair mentioned in the poem. The "hippie's" hair would seem to be the hardest to cut or style. Great poem! V.A.
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I'm enjoying these barber poems. I can imagine the different types of hair mentioned in the poem. The "hippie's" hair would seem to be the hardest to cut or style. Great poem! V.A.
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Excellent, many thanks V.A.
Comment from thebluestar
Thank you for sharing your talent and humour in this little piece. Having never sat in the barber's chair, I can only say that you have captured the essence of the hairdresser too lol
One journey I make out of necessitation, my little grandson pulls my hair otherwise. Out of joy, nope, I would rather leave it well alone, go with the curls lol Net.
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Thank you for sharing your talent and humour in this little piece. Having never sat in the barber's chair, I can only say that you have captured the essence of the hairdresser too lol
One journey I make out of necessitation, my little grandson pulls my hair otherwise. Out of joy, nope, I would rather leave it well alone, go with the curls lol Net.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
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I like the curls...lol.
Comment from Matoshka
I hadn't read part two, and it is as fun and light as part 1 and part 3. Being a barber takes great skill and a very listening and understanding ear. I enjoyed it very much. Blessings
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I hadn't read part two, and it is as fun and light as part 1 and part 3. Being a barber takes great skill and a very listening and understanding ear. I enjoyed it very much. Blessings
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
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Glad you enjoyed...
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You are so welcome. I did indeed. Blessings.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like the metaphoric nature of this poem. Social commentaries and philosophical poems such as this one are given a special flavour when images and metaphors are used to enrich them. kudos
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I like the metaphoric nature of this poem. Social commentaries and philosophical poems such as this one are given a special flavour when images and metaphors are used to enrich them. kudos
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
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Excellent, many thanks kudos...
