My Uncle Ned (now dead)
When love goes on and on and on,,,5 total reviews
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning Poet. A great addition to the Halloween poetry collection on Fanstory. I wish you the best. Thanks for using my artwork... Loyd
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Good morning Poet. A great addition to the Halloween poetry collection on Fanstory. I wish you the best. Thanks for using my artwork... Loyd
Comment Written 27-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Thanks for your comments and good wishes. It worked...WE WON!!! I was actually looking for a picture to accompany a different poem, but changed my mind when I found this one and decided to write a poem to go with it instead.
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You are very welcome, Loyd
Comment from purrfect tale
Well, at least they are together again. This made me laugh out loud. I really liked the reference to losing her heart to set the reader up for the last line.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2011
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Well, at least they are together again. This made me laugh out loud. I really liked the reference to losing her heart to set the reader up for the last line.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2011
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Thank you, purrfect tale. I am glad you liked it & do appreciate your comments.
Comment from RYME4U
Well done. This was a hard category to write for. The picture you chose enhances your words. I like the double meaning at the end.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2011
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Well done. This was a hard category to write for. The picture you chose enhances your words. I like the double meaning at the end.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2011
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Thank you, RYME4U. I appreciate your review and kind words.
Comment from Spencerpenrod
This is really funny. Haiku is such a hard form of poetry to effectively tell a story, but I feel you did so well with this. It created quite a bizarre mental image, as well
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2011
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This is really funny. Haiku is such a hard form of poetry to effectively tell a story, but I feel you did so well with this. It created quite a bizarre mental image, as well
Comment Written 26-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2011
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Thank you, Spencerpenrod, for those nice comments.
Comment from justjo66
Cute picture to go with your cute poem.
One would ask...which came first the idea for
the poem or the picture?
Either way you could not have found a better match.
Technically your Haiku is correct.
Very amusing poem.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2011
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Cute picture to go with your cute poem.
One would ask...which came first the idea for
the poem or the picture?
Either way you could not have found a better match.
Technically your Haiku is correct.
Very amusing poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2011
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Thank you, justjo66, for your review & comments. Also, welcome to FanStory. As for the picture, I was actually searching the art base for a picture to go with a different haiku, but decided to scrap it & write a different one when I found this one. You're going to love exploring the art that's available for us to use. It's a little like visiting an art gallery without leaving home.
