Love Has No Goodbye/ The Widdow
A widdow finds love and they're together forever.3 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
good thought of which I call a 5-7-5 senyru
Just one thing instead of --
All that I ask you_Love me right or let me go_I`m through with these games.
format it this way--
All that I ask you
Love me right or let me go
I`m through with these (your) games.
Gert
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good thought of which I call a 5-7-5 senyru
Just one thing instead of --
All that I ask you_Love me right or let me go_I`m through with these games.
format it this way--
All that I ask you
Love me right or let me go
I`m through with these (your) games.
Gert
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
Comment from moyramouse
I like your poem and I think you have worded it very well, but I could not read it without highlighting the words. I suggest you change the colour of the text to something darker as I am sure you are missing lots of reviews due to this. xxxmouse
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I like your poem and I think you have worded it very well, but I could not read it without highlighting the words. I suggest you change the colour of the text to something darker as I am sure you are missing lots of reviews due to this. xxxmouse
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
Comment from Rakuli
A nice piece about a subject many feel passionately on. You have conveyed the message vividly. Well done.
PS: Your poetry text white on a near white background and I had to highlight it with my mouse to read it -- you should fix that ;P
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A nice piece about a subject many feel passionately on. You have conveyed the message vividly. Well done.
PS: Your poetry text white on a near white background and I had to highlight it with my mouse to read it -- you should fix that ;P
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
