God's Will
Do God's will in your life!!4 total reviews
Comment from smudge
It is always difficult to express something meaningful in three lines. This succeeds in presenting an inspirational ideal. The 5-7-5 syllables is correct.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2011
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It is always difficult to express something meaningful in three lines. This succeeds in presenting an inspirational ideal. The 5-7-5 syllables is correct.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2011
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Thank you so much for your review!! I really appreciate it!!!
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A GOOD POEM AND THE WORDS YOU HAVE CHOSEN ARE TRUE . i enjoyed reading your poem. The words have been spoken by many people. MARY
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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A GOOD POEM AND THE WORDS YOU HAVE CHOSEN ARE TRUE . i enjoyed reading your poem. The words have been spoken by many people. MARY
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review!!
Comment from mumsyone
If you do God's will
you will never fell (fail?)... never
you always prevail!
Your 5-7-5 is true, but I think you meant to say 'fail' instead of 'fell'?
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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If you do God's will
you will never fell (fail?)... never
you always prevail!
Your 5-7-5 is true, but I think you meant to say 'fail' instead of 'fell'?
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much for pointing that out! Thanks for your review!!
Comment from writer_13
You got the right flow with the 5-7-5 verse but I am wondering if in the line...'you will never fell'...did you mean 'never fall' or 'never fail'? The word fell doesn't seem to fit.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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You got the right flow with the 5-7-5 verse but I am wondering if in the line...'you will never fell'...did you mean 'never fall' or 'never fail'? The word fell doesn't seem to fit.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much for pointing that out!!
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I appreciate your review!!
