Heaven or Hell.
A Sedoka about where to go and how.34 total reviews
Comment from rheabug
This is a very nice interpretation of this Bible message.
I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you for sharing this and congratulations on the all time best! Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011
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This is a very nice interpretation of this Bible message.
I enjoyed it to the end. Thank you for sharing this and congratulations on the all time best! Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 25-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review. Take care and have a nice day, Ine. So pleased with you 6, makes the rest of my evening if not more.
Comment from Dougspoetry
Thank God by believing in Jesus our sins are forgiven as he gives us a new heart. Then we are promised the joys of heaven. This poem is a good reminder that we need to take sin and hell seriously, and that through Christ we can escape the terrors of hell. Nice poem!
God Bless!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011
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Thank God by believing in Jesus our sins are forgiven as he gives us a new heart. Then we are promised the joys of heaven. This poem is a good reminder that we need to take sin and hell seriously, and that through Christ we can escape the terrors of hell. Nice poem!
God Bless!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Take care and blessings, Ine
Comment from HPicasso
A SMALL POEM WITH A BIG MEANING.
This poem is well written, followint the Sedoka form.
the contrast between heaven and hell is obvious, we are God's only creation that has a choice.
I love the colors you used, and the picture is just perfect.
congratulation!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011
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A SMALL POEM WITH A BIG MEANING.
This poem is well written, followint the Sedoka form.
the contrast between heaven and hell is obvious, we are God's only creation that has a choice.
I love the colors you used, and the picture is just perfect.
congratulation!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Take care and blessings, Ine
Comment from elgone
A simply brilliant expression of faith set in poetic verse. You never cease to amaze me when you write. Your style is not belabored with nuance and format. It is direct and easy to understand. Your writing is a treasure meant to be shared.
E
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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A simply brilliant expression of faith set in poetic verse. You never cease to amaze me when you write. Your style is not belabored with nuance and format. It is direct and easy to understand. Your writing is a treasure meant to be shared.
E
Comment Written 24-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thanks for your thoughtful and kind review. Take care, Ine. Can't write that posh as some poets can. But like things to be undertandable to all.
Comment from Espresso momma
A very true poem for those who want to hear the truth. God gives us many opportunities to change the ways of our heart. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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A very true poem for those who want to hear the truth. God gives us many opportunities to change the ways of our heart. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Melspoems
I like how you show the two directions we can travel after death in the sedoka.
Reading the bible gives a ticket to heaven, sinning and hurting others sends us the other way.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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I like how you show the two directions we can travel after death in the sedoka.
Reading the bible gives a ticket to heaven, sinning and hurting others sends us the other way.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello robina it has been a long time since I have read
A Sedoku poem
I like how you showed us the way to heaven and not thoughts of hell when you said--
Sinning t'wards others
we should never ever do,
as it takes us straight to Hell.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Hello robina it has been a long time since I have read
A Sedoku poem
I like how you showed us the way to heaven and not thoughts of hell when you said--
Sinning t'wards others
we should never ever do,
as it takes us straight to Hell.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Jean Lutz
I call my Bible my handbook of life. It has served me well for many decades now. Next month I will be taking Alvintethington's class on Biblical Poetry and hope to glean even more treasure.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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I call my Bible my handbook of life. It has served me well for many decades now. Next month I will be taking Alvintethington's class on Biblical Poetry and hope to glean even more treasure.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from tekayep
Thanks to you for selecting my artwork. I'm not an expert in this form of poetry, but am humbled as I think my work fits it perfectly. Thanks again. Tek
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thanks to you for selecting my artwork. I'm not an expert in this form of poetry, but am humbled as I think my work fits it perfectly. Thanks again. Tek
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a nice Sunday, Ine. Glad I found it and your work was perfect for what I wrote.
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is a well-constructed Sedoka, Ine. I'm not very familiar with the form, so I was glad for the author's notes. This seems like a challening form, but one that suits your writing here very well. Great advice, too! Well done, my friend. Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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This is a well-constructed Sedoka, Ine. I'm not very familiar with the form, so I was glad for the author's notes. This seems like a challening form, but one that suits your writing here very well. Great advice, too! Well done, my friend. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your lovely review. Have a nice Sunday, Ine. Or whatever is left of it.
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Always a pleasure, Ine. Thanks for the good wishes...Bev
