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An Idyll Poem85 total reviews
Comment from rawahymis
A sweet opera staged in nature's pretty arena.
There is no beauty better than the setting here: joyous trees surrounded by colourful flowers and sweet scents of purity.
The lines compliment the picture well, conjuring up pretty images in nature.
The poem culminates in a lover's kiss, assuring all of a future full of peace and passion.
Good luck.
rawahy
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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A sweet opera staged in nature's pretty arena.
There is no beauty better than the setting here: joyous trees surrounded by colourful flowers and sweet scents of purity.
The lines compliment the picture well, conjuring up pretty images in nature.
The poem culminates in a lover's kiss, assuring all of a future full of peace and passion.
Good luck.
rawahy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Wow rawahy...thank you so much for your beautiful words...blessings.
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My pleasure. Blessings to you too.
Comment from justjo66
Beautiful picture for your poem. Your poem has
a nice rhythmn and flow. I love the rhymes and
your words. The story is told in a short time.
I enjoyed this very much.
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Beautiful picture for your poem. Your poem has
a nice rhythmn and flow. I love the rhymes and
your words. The story is told in a short time.
I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much justjo66, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from Kpj731
beautifully written! It's so descriptive and i love it. i could almost feel what the person in the shory was feeling, the wind, the sun. Thanks and good luck in the contest!
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beautifully written! It's so descriptive and i love it. i could almost feel what the person in the shory was feeling, the wind, the sun. Thanks and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Kpj731...I am so glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from RileyBond
This is a great poem. The wording is wonderful, and the imagery of the beginning is excellent. I very much enjoyed reading this.
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This is a great poem. The wording is wonderful, and the imagery of the beginning is excellent. I very much enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing RileyBond...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
Nice poem about the beautiful and colorful view of the season Spring and how spring influences one for romance
Good luck
Gert
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Hello author
Nice poem about the beautiful and colorful view of the season Spring and how spring influences one for romance
Good luck
Gert
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much Gert, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from quashdog
With a lovely scene like that, romance was bound to happen. Good piece of verse with nice rhythm and good rhyme. Have a good weekend.
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With a lovely scene like that, romance was bound to happen. Good piece of verse with nice rhythm and good rhyme. Have a good weekend.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing quashdog...I appreciate your words...have yourself a great weekend as well...blessings.
Comment from JennieClare
Well this sure is idyllic and makes the reader really want to be in that place with his/her love. Great rhyme and meter. All the best in the contest. jennie
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Well this sure is idyllic and makes the reader really want to be in that place with his/her love. Great rhyme and meter. All the best in the contest. jennie
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much jennie, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
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My pleasure. Jennie
Comment from rumi <3
It has an exceptional flow and the picture in addition to fitting the words of your poem is simply mind blowing! I like the way you have gradually described the setting making it appropriate for the scene to follow. all the best!
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It has an exceptional flow and the picture in addition to fitting the words of your poem is simply mind blowing! I like the way you have gradually described the setting making it appropriate for the scene to follow. all the best!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from skip ward
This poem appeals to the senses--sight, smell, touch and draws its images from nature, culminating in the emotion of love. Good luck on the contest.
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This poem appeals to the senses--sight, smell, touch and draws its images from nature, culminating in the emotion of love. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much skip ward, for reading and reviewing...I am glad you enjoyed it...blessings.
Comment from Terry wrote
This is lovely ... and the illustration as beautiful as the poem itself. Even without the illustration to guide us, your words set the scene and your even rhyme and meter carry it out. Thanks for a moment of peace in the day.
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This is lovely ... and the illustration as beautiful as the poem itself. Even without the illustration to guide us, your words set the scene and your even rhyme and meter carry it out. Thanks for a moment of peace in the day.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2011
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I thank you so much Terry wrote, for the six stars...I truly appreciate them and I am glad you enjoyed my poem...blessings.
