Wall Street
Power and Influence of Wall Street16 total reviews
Comment from marilyo
Your poem conveys the opinion of many for sure. I like the beat of the piece - quick and crisp, reminiscent of the fast-paced life in Wall Street.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Your poem conveys the opinion of many for sure. I like the beat of the piece - quick and crisp, reminiscent of the fast-paced life in Wall Street.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thank you! I'm glad you got the clipped pace. Have a lovely day. ~Tricia
Comment from Helen Tan
I enjoyed the images and thoughts evoked in this naani, good luck in the contest. =D
Unscrupulous men
In their ivory towers
I like the contrasting images these lines present - the pristine, glistening towers that house the dark dealings of "unscrupulous men".
Manipulate numbers
Creative accounting and insider trading come to mind.
Growing fat on our dollars
Definitely! =D
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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I enjoyed the images and thoughts evoked in this naani, good luck in the contest. =D
Unscrupulous men
In their ivory towers
I like the contrasting images these lines present - the pristine, glistening towers that house the dark dealings of "unscrupulous men".
Manipulate numbers
Creative accounting and insider trading come to mind.
Growing fat on our dollars
Definitely! =D
Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thanks, Helen! Glad you "get it!" Have a wonderful day! ~Tricia
Comment from Betty517
Oh don't get me started! This is an awesome true naani poem! You tell them what is really up and we are more than aware but yet nothing gets done! They are put in cushiony prisons and get a hand slap for stealing millions of dollars from people who can't afford it! Then they are released to do it again! Great poem got me all worked up! Good luck in the contest.
Betty
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Oh don't get me started! This is an awesome true naani poem! You tell them what is really up and we are more than aware but yet nothing gets done! They are put in cushiony prisons and get a hand slap for stealing millions of dollars from people who can't afford it! Then they are released to do it again! Great poem got me all worked up! Good luck in the contest.
Betty
Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thanks, Betty! I'm glad it struck a chord. I know lots of people that lost their you-know-what's - and THEN some because of these types of guys (and gals!) on Wall Street! Glad you could appreciate the poem. Have a lovely day. ~Tricia
Comment from Van
Great Naani. Precise message. Adequately done in less than twenty five syllables.
Content: excellent
Flow: What's not to flow in shorts? lol
Mechanics: spot on syllable count
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Great Naani. Precise message. Adequately done in less than twenty five syllables.
Content: excellent
Flow: What's not to flow in shorts? lol
Mechanics: spot on syllable count
Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your praise and kind review. ~Tricia
Comment from cercie
great poem and wonderful words to express a Naani poem. Thank upi for sharing. I have never tried this form of poetry but after reading this I might
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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great poem and wonderful words to express a Naani poem. Thank upi for sharing. I have never tried this form of poetry but after reading this I might
cercie
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thanks! I'm glad you stopped by to read it! Have a lovely day. ~Tricia
Comment from The Stranger
oh the lure of Wall street, the untold damage caused by the infamous crash and the untold greed of the wealthy stockbrokers all spring to mind
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oh the lure of Wall street, the untold damage caused by the infamous crash and the untold greed of the wealthy stockbrokers all spring to mind
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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I'm so glad you liked it. Have a great day.
