A Haunting
Quatrains18 total reviews
Comment from rchitwood
Very creative and I enjoyed reading about this haunted house. Very good structure and I like your poem as and I don't like syllable counts.A pleasure to read and your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Very creative and I enjoyed reading about this haunted house. Very good structure and I like your poem as and I don't like syllable counts.A pleasure to read and your photo compliments your poem well.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 05-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks Rita. I had fun with this one!!! Debbie
Comment from Mariea
Hello Debbie. A well written piece of work that I enjoyed as well as your final humour.
Structure - well put together and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - nice easy flow
Have a great day, hugs Mia
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Hello Debbie. A well written piece of work that I enjoyed as well as your final humour.
Structure - well put together and developed
Rhyme - consistent throughout
Rhythm - nice easy flow
Have a great day, hugs Mia
Comment Written 05-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks mia. I had fun with this one~~~ DEbbie
Comment from seashellrees4
I liked your poem! I thought your words captured the "spirit" of a haunted house beautifully. I'm not exactly sure what quatrains are, or what the syllable count should be, but for my part, it didn't interfere with my enjoyment of it. I thought it had great flow. Have you seen/felt any ghosts in your 125 year old house?
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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I liked your poem! I thought your words captured the "spirit" of a haunted house beautifully. I'm not exactly sure what quatrains are, or what the syllable count should be, but for my part, it didn't interfere with my enjoyment of it. I thought it had great flow. Have you seen/felt any ghosts in your 125 year old house?
Comment Written 05-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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If you look in Poetry dances, it will tell you about quatrains. Glad you enjoyed!!! DEbbie
Comment from Linda England Bonam
That was really an enjoyable read for me, and I am happy to write a review for this entertaining piece! Boy I bet this time of year your house is pretty popular! LOL Well, who knows what this 'haunted house' my inspire as far as writing is concerned! Goooood Luck!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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That was really an enjoyable read for me, and I am happy to write a review for this entertaining piece! Boy I bet this time of year your house is pretty popular! LOL Well, who knows what this 'haunted house' my inspire as far as writing is concerned! Goooood Luck!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much!!! Debbie
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed reading your poem dejohnsrld, I'm glad you don't really need a rope though. Your poem is cleverly written and well thought out. The picture is great.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2011
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I enjoyed reading your poem dejohnsrld, I'm glad you don't really need a rope though. Your poem is cleverly written and well thought out. The picture is great.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2011
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Me too, although my house is truly supposed to be haunted. I've been here 24 years, nothing scary yet. Thanks so much!!! DEbbie
Comment from barkingdog
Who needs a syllable count? It read swiftly through without a hiccup. Fun piece. It would be great recorded with eerie sounds behind a witch's voice reciting it. Anyway that's how it read to me.
Oh, your rhyme sounded fine as well, Debbie.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2011
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Who needs a syllable count? It read swiftly through without a hiccup. Fun piece. It would be great recorded with eerie sounds behind a witch's voice reciting it. Anyway that's how it read to me.
Oh, your rhyme sounded fine as well, Debbie.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much. This was a fun one to write and it would be awesome recorded!!! Take care! Debbie
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Happy Halloween!:)BD
Comment from writerwish
Gravestones, the whole town fearing. Great descriptions here of the so called haunted houses. Not for me. I'd be outa there in no time flat. great poetry and spooky.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2011
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Gravestones, the whole town fearing. Great descriptions here of the so called haunted houses. Not for me. I'd be outa there in no time flat. great poetry and spooky.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2011
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Thank you. I've been here 24 years and nothing scary except for the occasional bat that sneaks in. You should see me chasing a batin my wheelchair with a big fishnet-now that's funny!!! Debbie
Comment from bellemarie
A great Halloween poem. What can I say, you've done it again, composed a perfectly delightful poem. Love the ending! Wierd, but fun.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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A great Halloween poem. What can I say, you've done it again, composed a perfectly delightful poem. Love the ending! Wierd, but fun.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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I am a bit weird at times too. My poetry seems to have a wide variety. Thanks so much for reviewing1!! Debbie
Comment from fireflylil
Deb, An interesting quatrain poem here of your haunted house.
It has very nice flow, great rhyming. I like the short but sweet lines! You must have fun living there, huh? Nice! Lil
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Deb, An interesting quatrain poem here of your haunted house.
It has very nice flow, great rhyming. I like the short but sweet lines! You must have fun living there, huh? Nice! Lil
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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I love my house. I was hospitalized in May, and they really tried to get me to go to a nursing home-no way!!! I am staying here. I've been here 24 years, I'm not moving now!!! Thanks ~Debbie
Comment from BigTomNY
Great job but to make an easier flow try;
Slanted walls
A Creaking floor
Creatures reflect in
Mirrors once more
Instead of:
Slanted walls
Creaking floors
Topic: Good
Flow: Great
Style: very good
structure: very good
Creativity: Awesome
Rhyme: good
Art: HHaunting
Overall:
Great job!!!!!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Great job but to make an easier flow try;
Slanted walls
A Creaking floor
Creatures reflect in
Mirrors once more
Instead of:
Slanted walls
Creaking floors
Topic: Good
Flow: Great
Style: very good
structure: very good
Creativity: Awesome
Rhyme: good
Art: HHaunting
Overall:
Great job!!!!!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2011
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Thanks for your suggestion and review!!! Debbie
