Comment from BigTomNY

Excellent

Another excellent write easily worthy of a 5 star rating!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep on keeping on!!!!!!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

Thank so much for your review my friend. Glad you enjoyed. Ine

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Charming, Ine! You tell the tale in an easy free manner. It has an innocence about it that I find very pleasant. I get the feeling that you are having fun with this. I'll look forward to reading more. Have an excellent day. Av.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

Thanks so much for your review. Have a nice Sunday, Ine.

Comment from Aramos

Good

Okay, so I read so far only this page, and I have to say that I love the structure and the simplicity and ease of reading.

If someone found only this page, they would wonder hard, what the rest of the book must have been about.

I also like the mixing of modern and older themes / concerns. Its almost sci-fi in its fiction. Very cool.
Dave

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

The first chapter is there as well. Possibly in portfolio. Or if you just click the 1 before the 2. Could you please clarify the 4 star, as you don't mention anything wrong.
Thanks so much for your review. Have a nice Sunday, Ine.

reply by Aramos on 25-Sep-2011

Certainly, that is fair, though I consider 4 stars to be very positive to be clear. As a visualizing reader I enjoy to styles of writing that immerse the reader in the environment. Like in Tolkien where you can see, with absoute clarity the environment.
While your work is beautifully crafted, I didn't know where I was. Though to be fair it is only a page. I will review the rest of the work if you like.

Comment from ephraim crud, COS.

Excellent

a delightful read, me Dutchess Ine. am very much
enjoying your adventures of Mareng. bring on the
next episode!
yours warmly, xx, eph.

p.s.- hope Robert had a great birthday
-if it's arrived yet!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

Thanks so much for your review. Have a nice Sunday, Ine. No Robert's birthday is this Wednesday.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

This was a great chapter I really like these chapters.. I read the first one to Evan and plan on doing so with this one as well later.. It was a pleasure reading..

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 Comment Written 25-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011

Thanks so much for your review. Have a nice Sunday, Ine. Nice check for me.