For You
A poem that shows how that guy love her2 total reviews
Comment from The Stranger
well this certainly goes a long way to show your appreciation that you have written straight from the heart. stunning and beautifuly versed
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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well this certainly goes a long way to show your appreciation that you have written straight from the heart. stunning and beautifuly versed
Comment Written 20-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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thanks a lot
Comment from MelissaBickel
There is a lot of sentiment here. It's very apparent that love and caring is shown here. But this being a 5/7/5 this poem isn't suited for this category.
What they want when the say five/seven/five is lines of syllables in that count. 5/7/5 you can have more than one grouping but each must be separated and be able to stand on their own.
I think they have an explanation of 5/7/5 on this site you might look it up.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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There is a lot of sentiment here. It's very apparent that love and caring is shown here. But this being a 5/7/5 this poem isn't suited for this category.
What they want when the say five/seven/five is lines of syllables in that count. 5/7/5 you can have more than one grouping but each must be separated and be able to stand on their own.
I think they have an explanation of 5/7/5 on this site you might look it up.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2011
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ok watever
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:) don't take it personal, I'm just trying to help. That is what growing in poetry is about. Learning and moving on.