Comment from the blue pixel

Excellent

What a charming little story Ine. I thought for a while that you were going to give us just an analogous story on life but there was more to it than that. Your ending was a lovely surprise and though I rarely read stories, chapters etc. I am so glad I read this one of yours. It was delightful and very well written, holding my interest all the way through. xx Pix

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review Pix. Warm regards, Ine

reply by the blue pixel on 23-Sep-2011

You're welcome Ine.

Comment from ephraim crud, COS.

Excellent

i love dragonflies. in fact, i saw several just yesterday, flying to and fro over a pond near to where i live. marvellous! -as is this most delightful and intriguing story.
thank you for shaing, me Dutchess Ine. warmly, xx, eph.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review eph. Warm regards, Ine

Comment from Osiek

Excellent

This is a lovely tale. Dragonflies are also good at eating mosquitos. When spray is used to kill the mosquitos, it also kills the dragonflies.

Enjoyed this very much!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review my friend.
Take care, Ine

Comment from rheabug

Excellent

This is a very cute story for your presentation. It would be nice for a page in a children's book of sorts. I think the art work is great for the piece. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review my friend. Warmest regards and take care, Ine

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

robina1978:

This is an interesting story about DRAGONFLIES. Most
games are invented as a result of children's creativity
and curiosity -- or that of a little dragon, as it were.
One small piece of spag for you below.

experiment with with his flames. -- eliminate second with

thanks for sharing
love,
jan

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review my friend. Warmest regards and take care, Ine

Comment from rchitwood

Excellent

Very good and your story has good creative imagination.This little dragon had a lot to learn and was achieving the results very well.This story was a pleasure to read.Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review my friend. Warmest regards and take care, Ine

Comment from Carolyn 12

Excellent

This is such a cute story..Dragonflies. Loved this..I just read along wondering where it was going to go and then boom-dragonflies. Thank you for sharing..

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review my friend. Warmest regards and take care, Ine

Comment from psalmist

Excellent

What an adorable children's story. I love the tale of this little dragon and your ending was delightful, dragonflies. As a teacher's aide, I also appreciated the little lesson that included vowel blends and their sounds. Terrific job on this one. Linda

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review my friend. Warmest regards and take care, Ine

Comment from cercie

Excellent

Very interesting children's story. I was saddened when you said he killed the flies. Thank you fro sharing this story with me.

Chris/cercie

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review my friend. Warmest regards and take care, Ine

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, robina, a great job writing this story about how the dragon flies began, i enjoyed reading this and now you'll have to get him to create lightning bugs.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review. Take care and have a nice evening/day, Ine.