Paranormal Adventures
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Where I Go, Will You Follow?"Case Studies of Hauntings
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Comment from Paradox Tremors
Things are beginning to get very, very interesting with our group of investigating team. Mia is a very helpful person to have around with the healing. Keep up the great writing my friend.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Things are beginning to get very, very interesting with our group of investigating team. Mia is a very helpful person to have around with the healing. Keep up the great writing my friend.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Hi, my faithful friend. Thank you so much for your extremely generous support...glad you liked the chapter. We're heading into some shark-infested waters! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from misscookie
As always your story always captures my attention.
I found this to be very interesting and for sure there was never a dull moment.
You for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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As always your story always captures my attention.
I found this to be very interesting and for sure there was never a dull moment.
You for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Hi, misscookie. Thank you so very much for your loyal support for my chapters. I really appreciate your interest and generosity, lovely lady. Blessings, Bev
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It is my pleasure.
Comment from Cheryl In Minnesota
"Limbo world," is a cool expression. "Carelessly crammed into cardboard boxes." Like the "c" word repetition. "Physical pleasure was gone to her forever." A sense of loss. I like "etheric web composed of lines of energy." Your expression has some poetic elements. Don't know if you were going for that but is appealed to me, as I usually write poems. Very nice work.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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"Limbo world," is a cool expression. "Carelessly crammed into cardboard boxes." Like the "c" word repetition. "Physical pleasure was gone to her forever." A sense of loss. I like "etheric web composed of lines of energy." Your expression has some poetic elements. Don't know if you were going for that but is appealed to me, as I usually write poems. Very nice work.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Hi, Cheryl. Thank you for noting the 'poetic elements' that I did try to place throughout the story. You are most kind to take time out to read my chapter and send along your generous review. Warmest regards, Bev
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Great Bev! Hello. I am very new to FanStory. Do you write poems too?? Nice to meet you.
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Welcome, Cheryl. I think you're going to love this site! I've been a member just a little over a year and have written in several different genres. Poetry is something I find a bit intimidating...but I wade into it every once in a while. I'm going to check out your profile and see what you've been up to. Stop by anytime! Warmest regards, Bev
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Thank you so much Bev. I look forward to connecting more with your work also. Yes, I REALLY love this site so far. It's my new healthful addiction. Talk to you later.
Cheryl
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You bet, Cheryl.
Comment from Gungalo
Hey, this is some pretty heavy stuff. I wonder what is in those books. Hmmm, make the story that much more compelling. I hope all are okay.
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Hey, this is some pretty heavy stuff. I wonder what is in those books. Hmmm, make the story that much more compelling. I hope all are okay.
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011
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Hi, Gungalo. Thanks for checking out my chapter. I really appreciate your support and generosity! XX Bev
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Oh it is no problem and great to read.
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Thanks, again, Gungalo. I appreciate your encouraging words. xx Bev
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Smiles.
