Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

For me the light at the end of the tunnel is God, not governments. I believe the recession is global and the governments cannot fix it. Yet if we the people would look to God things would then be turned around.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine

Comment from Piggies Grandma

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem very much, Robina. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. Sometimes prayer is the only thing we can believe in.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely Sunday, Ine

Comment from the blue pixel

Good

Some very interesting ideas in your poem Ine. Your metre was a little inconsisent but it didn't prevent me from your messages here. They were clearly delivered. I especially liked your first stanza but again, your metre was kind of stop, start but some interesting ideas. xx Pix

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Thanks fo your kind review and have a nice Sunday, Ine

Comment from Betty517

Excellent

The house market froze
The stock market down today

This poem is about something so serious and I must tell you this is a wonderful way to make people realize things are not going well for our country! Great poem!

Betty

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great Sunday.

reply by Betty517 on 18-Sep-2011

You Too Thanks! Betty

Comment from WilliamDeen

Excellent

I am not sure though that I see a light yet in the distance! Great poem with a wonderful rhyming scheme. It also has a smooth cadence.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great Sunday.

Comment from Espresso momma

Excellent

You from one end of the world and me from the other, we still see politics take control of our livelihood. I do think we are in at least a recession.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great Sunday.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

This was a great poem I couldn't agree more......it was very clever indeed loved the flow and word weaving in this one ..... always a pleasure to read a review your work ... thanks for sharing..... have a great weekend

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great Sunday.

Comment from rheabug

Excellent

Robina, this is a very nice quatrain for the contest. Has all the components down perfectly. Good luck in the contest!
Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great Sunday.

Comment from rchitwood

Excellent

Your poem has so much truth and emotion so many are suffering today.Your poem has good structure and line flow.Very creative and your photo compliments it well.Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Hi Ine. Well the recession. There is no end in sight yet.
Certainly not if we have to keep the grip on the purse.
I hope there is light at the end of the tunnel. Good poem with a great message, a good flow and rhyme , Great work. Liefs Fia

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2011

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.